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absolutly brilliant

loved it thank you for updating

Ch 5 - You may have agonised over the chapter, but it was worth it! I can't wait for the big argument/fight between Harry and Severus!

Bravo!

SP

Hey Jilliane! I'm really enjoying your story. I've never seen Snape convicted of the crime of euthanasia before but it makes perfect sense, in a twisted, bureaucratic MoM sort of way. I love Shacklebolt as acting Minister and for his unwavering loyalty to Snape. Adored the honorable standoff between Snape and Harry that nearly got Snape killed again too. You have some fresh and wonderful ideas and write very well. I look forward to wherever you are headed with this.

God, how I love angst (angst whore extrodinare!) and this fic has it in spades. Now all Severus needs is to feel redeemed. I think, as much as he feels that he is most hated by others, that he hates himself more and is lost within. Maybe a certain someone can show him that life can be good, that he is entitled to be happy. Aww, poor Sevvie needs a hug! *glomp* LoL

I was deeply upset that JKR killed off Snape and never finished DH. The Snape character was the best character in the series and I love fan fiction simply because they choose to resurrect Snape and give him his due. I love your story and your portrayal of Snape and the other characters it is in my opinion that this should have been the continuation of DH. Please continue the story I can't wait for future chapters.

You sure know how to create anticipation. Can't wait to see when Mr Potter will finally open his mouth again :o)

Well that somewhat answered my question as to why Kingsley is helping him but I think Harry has a part in that as well. I am also curious as to why Harry wont look at Severus, is he still in emotional turmoil about what happened with Severus

update again soon

I am waiting for a quick update ;-)

Let me guess - Auror Potter will be Severus guard? :-)

"I am not alone in thinking Harry Potter is the only hero amongst us, Severus."

Don't you mean the opposite? Doesn't Kingsley mean that Harry ISN'T the only hero of the war, and that Kingsley isn't alone in thinking and appreciating this fact?!
Because in your wording he just insulted Severus and said that it was all Potter's doing alone - which makes little sense with his earlier friendly and apologetic attitude... And would also be a strange thing to say out of the blue since Severus never tried to have the positive impact of his deeds acknowledged or Potter's diminished.

Uh, I'm curious about the chapter titles: they don't exactly correspondent with the content. Especially the third one "Betrothed To Your Enemy" sounds very different from what ACTUALLY happens in it. It's a bit weird ^_^ Initially I thought it might be due to splitting longer chapters in several seperate posts but that doesn't seem to be the case...