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for Only a House

by Jilliane

person dahar
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really excellent and I hope you're planning to continue it... It's a terrific idea - the two being stuck there like that - and seeing Harry from Snape's POV is a lot of fun. Please do keep writing.
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a fantastic story! It's entirely as enjoyable a read as Rowlings originals. I can see that it has been a very long time since you've updated this story, so I won't pain myself to maintain the hope that more will come- but if you have written more on a different site, or you continue the story, I would love it if you could let me know. Reading this story and the last has allowed me to escape back into the world I love and have missed so much :)
person cravedom
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you still writing? I keep hoping you will continue this story, your Severus is always wonderful and I miss it.

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story until now and I'm curious to read more of it. Good job!
person Rylan
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well written, I'm hooked - please update soon, I want to see how you get these two together.

Rylan
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're slouch at writing. I enjoyed the setup to your story. I'm looking forward to more.
person cravedom
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to apologize for not reviewing this story before. Sometimes we take our writers for granted and others we fear not having anything clever or original to say. Maybe that is just me, I do stress about everything
person Evange
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story is built. It is good to read a story with a different outcome than the book. I never thought, or a least I hoped Snape would be one of the people to die. Very inventive way to die though. Anyway, I also like the way you have not put any smut into the story yet. I hope there will be lots more of this story to come. Please update soon.
person Mikra
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find that I very much like this and hope that you'll continue soon :)
person Lucie
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jilliane,

First of all, don't give up this story. I really like the way that you have set up the situation that Harry and Severus are in. I am guessing that Harry doesn't hate Severus at all? And I am really looking forward to how their relationship between them develops and grows. The stroy just feels so real with Severus still hating himself and Kingsley wanting to help him as he is still essentially a very good man whp porbably suffered more than anyone else just about. You show this really well and I am looking forward to more.

*huggles*

Lucie