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Good ol' Studdy! :)

Oh!! A cliffie! How irritating......

Update reeeeeeeeeeeally soon!

Must find out if it worked or not!

Oh, that is a horrible cliffy, you are evil!!! Poor of us helpless readers lol. Anyway, I really enjoyed this last chapters, I think Harry approched Severus very well and showed him that he really cares. So you get a chocolate cake, hope you like it. xoxo

Oh no you didn't. How dare you stop there. You are EBIL!! EBILL I say. Sooooo...Did it wor?? Update soon and ill give you a nice big cookie!! Oh here you go*hands over said cookie* your so good to us updating two chappies you deserve the cookie ;)

I enjoy your writing style tremendously. Your stories all have a good plot and original ideas.
I do have one small critique about a 'habit' that I have noticed in your writing. You tend to use the words "the other" often and usually the thought ends with "other". To me, it seems lke an incomplete thought. I usually think, 'the other what? Like these examples I found in chapter 36..."Harry stared silently at the other" or "

you're EVIL!

How could you leave us like that?????????????? I mean, honestly! Torture!

Arent you the busy little bee! Three chapters all at once! Oh, and let me be the first to congratulate you on 13,000+ hits! WELL done!

Chapter 36--Good for determined Harry! I'm glad he finally made Severus see that, "self-esteem issues" aside, he is worth having!

Chapter 37--Oh poor younger Severus! His grief over Aidan "dying". Quite the fancy lie Dumbledore told.

Chapter 38--I should have known you'd throw a cliffie in the works! Get thee to the 'puter, Woman, and tell us what evil plan Harry and Sev have in mind for that rat Lucius!

Make him suffer! Make him suffer grieviously!!

woo hoo hoo. can not wait for the revengyness. You'll get yours Lucius. Mwah ha ha. Poor past Sev. Crying. At least he will be happy soon right? RIGHT? Heh the smut was GOOOOOD! Lubly lubly. Thanx for putting me on the list. Dont wanna miss how this ends.

Cue Lucius being really sorry that he's a complete bastard! WOO! He's not gonna like this, is he...

And two more chapters! Yay!!

Chapter 39--I totally didn't even see the Stubby thing coming. Excellent piece of misdirection! That chapter did seem a bit random at the time, but I was completely focused on Lucius' incredible vanity rather than the elf. Bravo for that! And "dratted epistle", NICE!

Chapter 40--Aww...Harry is just so adorable! All worried over having to do Sev instead of the other way round, not wanting to hurt him. And the bit about being a man and comparing equipment, as well as the flinging of the hair...great humour there!

Two great chapters, and even though you were horrible enough to leave it on a cliffie (but then, when don't you?) I don't mind so much, because you've said you've got another story in the works. YAY to that! Always good to hear, and can't wait to see what it's about! In the meantime, don't leave us hanging too long! UPDATE!!!!!!