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for Lentesco

by SickPuppy

person CT
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM

While I have to agree with Jilliane that I was looking forward to the smut, especially after denying us Harry/Aiden's POV over his first time, I loved the story. Lucius is a slimy bastard and it's good to see him be outwitted, for one, and take a shot for another. LOL...love to see how he manages to survive all the coming years with Narcissa, or better yet, how explains to his wife his sudden lack of "interest". Good job on this story, very enjoyable, and with an original concept.

BTW....just because I don't often review doesn't mean I'm not reading, you know, but yeah, okay, I see what you and Jilliane are aleays whinging about. I'll try to be a better reviewer in the future. Oh, right...can't wait for the next story. The teaser was cruel, but brill.
person Nikte
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON THE ENDING OF THIS GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! (SHE DANCES AROUND THE COMPUTER THROWING FLOWERS) I really liked this story, and I loved Severus letter for Lucius, it was so tipical for him to return exactly what he got lol. I hope you post your new story soon, and please post me about it. LOVE, COOKIES AND KISSES!!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh that is really really sneaky I love it, I love the circle and that lucius will finally pay. The house elf was a great touch now if we can just get him free hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm Update soon and if I am not on your list please add me I would hate to miss an update thanks for the reading
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! :) Lucius gets what he deserves!!!! And now Sev can go give Harry what he deserves too! *grin*
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck yes! Go Snape, go Snape, go Snape!
person Kay
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved every bit of the story till now. You are one sick Puppy aren't you... doing this to poor Luc. *lol*
It was a nice addition of letting Snape in some way tell Luc what Harry said in chapter 36... well Snape put it more bluntly but I think in general it means the same ^___^
Wouldn't mind for some... well action, but not necessarily. Well looking forward for the good things to come and for the Author's Note. Want to see whether I got everything along the way...

Btw thanks to you I now need to find a fic I've read years ago (that also involves some time travelling and Harry and Snape and so on) because I just remembered it while reading your story.

schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!

you didn't do that to Lucius, OMG you didn't!!!! *laughs her arse off* And they say revenge is not worth it... pff!
person Nikte
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was brilliant, right now I
person poohbear74
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
that is so f up!!
But luc did deserve it.
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so good sorry for not reviewing the last 7 chapters so count this as 7reviews