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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're not sorry in the least! ARE you!?! Do you have a black leather corset and a whip stashed in your wardrobe? You MUST, because you get such evil satisfaction from torturing your readers!
Alright....
I, for one, like it that you go back and forth between past and present. It keeps the suspense and intrigue factor high, and even though I'm assuming they'll eventually meld together somehow, at this point it works well as to keeping everything straight (if that makes sense). At any rate, Severus' abuse at the hands of LecherousLucius makes it easy to understand why he's the curmudgeonly git we all know and love today.
Yeah, and so now we know why Severus is up in the infirmary getting tossed off by Pomfrey every week, but what is Dumbledore whinging to McGonagall about?!? Trust you to leave it in the air, you evil woman! Update!!
Alright....
I, for one, like it that you go back and forth between past and present. It keeps the suspense and intrigue factor high, and even though I'm assuming they'll eventually meld together somehow, at this point it works well as to keeping everything straight (if that makes sense). At any rate, Severus' abuse at the hands of LecherousLucius makes it easy to understand why he's the curmudgeonly git we all know and love today.
Yeah, and so now we know why Severus is up in the infirmary getting tossed off by Pomfrey every week, but what is Dumbledore whinging to McGonagall about?!? Trust you to leave it in the air, you evil woman! Update!!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting so far. I'd really like to see how this turns out.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Severus. I just know this was that dirty shit Lucius' doing. Let's hope he's not going to freak too much when Harry offers to help (as we know he will.)
This is good! I can't wait for an update!
Oh, and poor Poppy, too. Can't imagine THAT was in the job description: "stocking up infirmary stores, keeping records straight for entire student body, occasionally may have to stroke off cranky Potions Master..."
This is good! I can't wait for an update!
Oh, and poor Poppy, too. Can't imagine THAT was in the job description: "stocking up infirmary stores, keeping records straight for entire student body, occasionally may have to stroke off cranky Potions Master..."
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And STILL with the cliffies.......nice place to leave off, you horrid woman!
Poppy Pomfrey having to....erm...."relieve"....Severus Snape once a week, eh? Update immediately; I MUST know why!
Poppy Pomfrey having to....erm...."relieve"....Severus Snape once a week, eh? Update immediately; I MUST know why!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well!! That was slightly unexpected! Update soon?
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tooooo short! UPDATE SOON!!!!! I am enjoying this story very much sooo far =D
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...another update so soon! Seems a strong hand is what it takes, eh? *grins evilly*
First class writing, as always, and I think it's clever how you've switched between present and past. That was unexpected, but I liked it! Lucius as malicious as ever, poor Sev only wanting some love and affection, can't wait to see where you're going with this! My only complaint is that you didn't answer my question...WHY must Pomfrey service Severus weekly?? Those with smut filled minds want to know! Update! and make it a longer chapter! Now!
(and yeah...what IS it with that CT character anyway? She never reviews my stuff either, the wench!)
First class writing, as always, and I think it's clever how you've switched between present and past. That was unexpected, but I liked it! Lucius as malicious as ever, poor Sev only wanting some love and affection, can't wait to see where you're going with this! My only complaint is that you didn't answer my question...WHY must Pomfrey service Severus weekly?? Those with smut filled minds want to know! Update! and make it a longer chapter! Now!
(and yeah...what IS it with that CT character anyway? She never reviews my stuff either, the wench!)
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to know more! I want to know what's wrong with Snape and is Harry fantasizing about Snape and just doesn't realize it? I also love the idea of Grimmauld being turned into a museum place for the war. I think that is an awesome idea!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even more mystery!!!! AH well, I'm sure all will be explained eventually. Update soon!!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're certainly on a roll today, three chapters one right after the other all in the same day, but...Grrrrrrr! You're going to play this out as long as possible, aren't you? Cause you LUURVE torturing your readers, DON'T you?!
And Harry....always in denial, even though we know it's SexySev he really wants! (Hehehe..isn't it always?!)
So, will Harry be taking over Poppy's...."duties"?
Update! We MUST know, you cliffhangering, torturing wretch!
And Harry....always in denial, even though we know it's SexySev he really wants! (Hehehe..isn't it always?!)
So, will Harry be taking over Poppy's...."duties"?
Update! We MUST know, you cliffhangering, torturing wretch!