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by SickPuppy

person poohbear74
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad that they can not have sex with one another and that he has to keep this curse because of LUC.

I liked the chapters and hope to see more of them soon.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is Awwwwwwww poor Sev. Maybe the curse could be broken if Harry topped. Why am I suddenly seeing this as a carnival game? Hit the target X number of times and the alarms and flashing lights go off and you're a winner? Sorry, I'm twisted. The only way for Harry to do that would be to take a stamina and aphrodisiac potions at the same time? But then poor Sev would be hurting. Drat that blond.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And now... aw, Poor Sev. Though I can't help but think that Harry doesn't ever back down from things. I'm sure - much to Severus' mortification - he'll have a whole team assembled to fix this in no time. Much to Ron's mortification as well, I'm sure.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UH oh i forgot to leave my e mail addy Carmeleyes22@hotmail.com
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I'm sure Poppy was relieved. LOL. And you'd think Severus would get the hint as Harry skips his way down to "do the job". LOL

I love this. I simultaneously feel terrible for the poor man and am giggling gleefullt as Harry makes his brain turn to mush.
person alma
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person KaeXLi
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.....i love your work!!!! keep writting forever!!!!!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, maybe I've confused this with another story, but isn't Dumbledore meant to be in a portrait?...

Anyway, update soon!!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHH I see!! That was a flashback! Right...Duh...Heh..

Update soon!!

P.S. I do like this 2 chapters at a time thing =D