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by SickPuppy

person Nikte
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I was right!!!!!!! Aidan and Harry are the same person, I hope this time around Harry could help Severus, and they can have their happy ending, thanks for the update. xoxo I
person Jilliane
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Harry....all this time stuff makes my brain hurt!

And, sort of a cliffhanger too. I knew you wouldn't be able to resist. I don't really get why Harry wouldn't return from youngSev/Aidan time, but then, as I said before, all this time turning stuff confuses me! I hope Harry DOES return, and is promptly relieved of his virginity by Severus.....but then.....wasn't he already relieved of it when he was Aidan? Hmm.....


*more confused than ever*


(but I like the story!)
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry get your man!
person poohbear74
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, can I just say YOU GO Girl!!!!!!!!!!!
I love these chapter, we now get to the really good stuff!!!!!!!!!
person sweet asphodel
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was right! Thanks for the updates.
person berkie88
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know... don't they realise WHY Severus was cursed? if Harry hadn't gone back in time, the whole expedition wouldn't have been necessary at all! because there would have been no Aiden for Severus to cheat on Lucius with so no reason for Lucius to curse him! though he might have doe it eventually ayway but it's doubtful there would have been anyone else Severus'd risk cheating on Lucius for...
that is probably a textbookcase on WHY time travel is restricted...
besides that, I am looking forward to seeing things from 'Aiden's perspective... if you'll write that anyway.
ope you'll continue soon!
person poohbear74
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see now!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh, wow, he is the reason sev is the way he is!!!!!!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well... i was not expecting that. i love it. so many surprises.
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT! What an excellent twist! I love it!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How did Aidan get the book? Meh, on to the next chapter!