rate_review Reviews

Awww! So glad to be of help, Sweetie! Lord only knows how many times you've talked me off the fence! Hugs to you!


Lol..........gotta love Lucius. Vain and narcisstic to the end. How typical of him to go get the tweezers out of the desk himself, yet order the elf to put them back. Only Lucius would be looking for grey hairs in amongst the silver blonde ones. Nicely done!

WOW HARRY REALLY MESSED UP THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!

"Still, all the brain hurting time stuff to one side...."

I'm with you there, Harry! This time turning stuff does hurt my brain, but I still enjoy the story! I'm particularly waiting for Harry to return to his own timeline (and thus stop the brain throbbing), cure Sev, and then see Sev and Harry both do a number on Lucius, the evil shit.

Update soon, Woman!

I really like this story. This first time I saw it, I kind of passed it over, looking for some other stories that I had been keeping track of. But I am so glad I finally clicked on it. The way that you keep that spirit that is essentially Severus's even when he is under the thumb of Lucius is a great example of artful characterization. I also like that you get the 'harry feel' from Aidan, even though you don't suspect its Harry. The moment in the bathroom with Lucius's book 'felt' like a Harry moment...it was superb. I would like to be added to this mailing list, if you don't mind, my email address is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.

Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

No, I don't think we need the sex scene from Harry's prospective. What might matter to the plot is Harry's emotions AFTER the sex. and we should get insight into those. But I think most of the time two versions of the same sex scene is slight over-kill. But whatever you decide will be fine, It is YOUR story after all. lol.

Great updates! Hurry up and give me more. Sorry, patience is not a virtue I possess.

Good chapter.

Yay for the update! TWO chapters! Yay for the explanation! It's made my head ache a bit less now that you've stated Aidan Marshall is an actual other person, Minerva's nephew, and still alive. It's all starting to make sense now!

Good job with this chapter, you're right, it was very important, and I hope too that Harry will find the solution soon!


(Btw.....would it really hurt to do the sex scene from Harry's POV?)

Thanks for the 2 chapters. Hope works is better now so you can have more time to write (and post!). lol...

Too short. Onto the next one though...