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for Harry Potter Exposed

by mccargos

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. There are spelling errors that should be fixed, such as mispelled names. I look forward to reading more, though.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow .. please please more .. and please say they did not kill remus... please please update soon .. later for now

angel
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your plot line (although I'm not too fond of Harry's name change, but I'll get over that). It seems to me like you need a beta... your current format is a little hard to read and you have some spelling errors that a beta would be sure to catch.

Anyway, I love your story, and I hope you update soon!
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a unique take on the Harry Potter world. Harry grandson of his arch enemy and heir to his self proclaimed throne. Very nice, Please update, I want to see how Harry deals with his up coming attack on Diagon Alley. Cheers!!!