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please update soon

Wow I like the newest chapter and hope that you will continue to keep this story going. I think that it can go a long way and it would be amazing to see how you bring it all together. I also wonder if you are going to make this one of those stories that give Harry another reason to feel guilty about something he did before loosing someone he cares about?

hmm,it started off all nice, hot and steamy, went to luke warm and finally drizzling chilly & cold with the mention of the case and you plan on ending it there??
I understand if you are running out of ideas, but why continue with a case if only to end it?
Anyway, I liked it very much, Alastor sounds perfect for Harry and you write beautifully!

Cool I thought thia WAS abandoned... Hope u update soon

I love this!! I hope that you continue!!!

Very good story, please keep writing it!

Wee! A new chapter, so you are planning on making it longer. I can't describe how pleased i am.

So without further ado, i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

MalachAdonai

Amazing read, very hot. You did an excellent job of introducing the story and the characters, something that most authors lack. The sex part was fantastic, hot without being overly so, and just great. Had you not told me, i wouldn't have guessed that it this story was a first-smut.

Alastor was a great character, and therefore i would adore a sequel, and i would ecstatic if you made it a story. (though please attach a link if it won't be on this site)

Malach Adonai