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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad. I really hope that there's a happy ending in store!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really well written - great start - hope to see more soon! :)
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, NOW'' I love it
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: This is an intriguing, HOT start to a story that beckons one in to stay. It's never bad to begin with a naked Lucius. WooHoo!!
Questions are raised, sadness is felt, body temperature skyrockets! Why can they not be together? A tantalizing question that will draw me back for the next chapter.
Questions are raised, sadness is felt, body temperature skyrockets! Why can they not be together? A tantalizing question that will draw me back for the next chapter.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, please continue
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I can't wait to read more!
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A friend suggested I come over and take a peek and a new Fab author here. I have to say... Wonderful joy. I loved the spiral of emotions as you build the story up then SHOVED me over with the last few lines. Normally I love happy happy but even though this was more emotionally raw, you have made it to my fav author bookmark folder.. Hope to be seeing more and soon..! Syg