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Chapter 5: Aside from the fact that I am not a fan of Narcissa, in this case I

Chapter 4: Well, I am starting to see Lucius' side of things. I don't know what he may have said at the beginning of their relationship to make it seem she was only something for the back alley of his life. But he obviously feels more for her now. Relationships change all the time. It feels like Hermione took him at some word he said and never asked, sued for or expected anything more. She has written him off as a one-dimensional Pureblood. Is that all she saw in him all the times they were together?

She needs to come clean and then let HIM decide what he feels about the situation. Secrecy is never good in this type of situation.

This was a great chapter. I hope that if Lucius does find another woman to be with, that Hermione will find out and be jealous to the point of going back to him. I can't wait to read more soon.

Excellent

I like it. Please update soon.

This is so sad. I can't wait to see what happens but I must confess I'm hoping for a happy ending....what can I say? I'm a romantic and proud of it! lol Great update, hope you can post again soon!

okay to be honest i read the first chapter the other day (it was the only one posted) and i was not sure that i was going to like. so when i saw that you had posted two more chapter i thaught what the heck. okay i really like it. personally i have a harder time reading first person accounts but i really like it that you are doing both of them. the only thing i dont like is that i think you are going to fast i want more story--lots more! will i do look very forward to the next chapter! :)
ps i also look forward to more chapters of your other stories! :)

Chapters 2-3: Now we get Lucius

Great' Great'' Chappys I love it Please give me someEEEEE,, ''Hehe''

Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.