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May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely story, thank you for sharing.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this was a wonderful story I really enjoyed it u made me just want to keep reading and I could not stop beautifully written ;)
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I couldn't stop from reading the whole tale.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent story. Thanks for sharing.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO SAD! Must read more.
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're very brave to write stories in present tense. I find that it works very well with the first person perspective. A bit hard to read at first, but I got used to it. The only thing I would caution is that you slipped into past tense for small bits, but other than that -- the story was great! I love your characterization of Lucius; Harry, I thought was a little childish...but he got over it, so it's all right. Although, getting into an engagement for the sake of getting over someone else is just wrong...maybe dating, but an engagement is just too far. At least, he didn't marry Persia. If Hermione wasn't pregnant or he didn't find out Hermione being pregnant, then I don't think he would have reconciliated with Hermione. In the beginning of their relationship, they just didn't communicate properly -- that's my opinion. Well, at least Lucius tried...enough ranting and raving, lol. Seriously though, it was a great story! =)
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I knew deep down Lucius Poos is just a big softie romantic1
Great stuff!
Great stuff!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this was a good story not to long and drawn out. Just the right amount of everything so now I am off to check out the rest of your stories Good writing