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Wow.. It's really well planned isn't it.. I hope he doesn't get himself killed in Milan.! Would be horrible for Draco!
And the others who do care for him.

I can't wait to read the article. If you have written it down. It will be interesting to see what happens next.

And if they can keep it secret..

First, your Lucius is the only Lucius is the only Lucius I can perv on, cuz I'm strictly a Draco girl! Second, this chapter, and all before this one is pure genius, I loved the descriptions of the pics in the article, brilliant! Third......(ahem)......MARRY ME? *ignore the fact that I'm straight, married, and a girl, oh, and you don't know me at all, but, still......*

whoop whoop! yay lucius is about to kick some ass but he has too many stipulations i was hoping for a little torture but at last...kingsley ruined all my fun lol great update i cant wait to see how this death plays out with the wizarding world and how much of a mafia woman jocasta was if she was planning on rescuing herself and narcissa...

Damn, I love this chapter. There's so much right with it, I don't know where to start. For one thing, I love it when villains, rather than being one-dimensional paper tigers that exist simply to be shot down, are so well-realized, three-dimensional, and so human, that you are reluctantly cheering them on (if not quite as much as you are cheering on the heroes). I just loved the description of Giacamo's tarty centenarian grandmother with the fondness for grappa. Then there's the dialog. This exchange? "I hate being called Minister. It makes me feel old and religious." "Both dreadful, of course." Genius. The last line of the fic with Jocasta's inner monologue? Also genius. I love the fact that the women in this fic, both the good ones and the bad ones, are not timid little wall flowers who leave the fighting to the menfolk. I love that they are as ruthless and as capable as the men. I love the fact that Lucius is planning on burning Milan to the ground, and that Kingsly is pretty much going to let him. I started reading this for the DM/HG content, but I'm wildly in love with the LM/NM (not so sub) sub-plot. Brava, dear. Positively cannot wait for more (but I will because good things are worth waiting for.)

ok.... just a tad bit ansty... i like that draco asked about his dad's school days.i can't wait til ur next post... i thought the little info u gave about the article was very tasteful and apporpriate to the story so good job on that. it was kinda funny that draco and hermione thought about having sex but didn't, i've had those moments b4. Renata needs to burn in hell!!!! she kinda reminds me of bella. but yeah, i was extra surprised to see another post up here.... Keep writing!

I don't know what we did to deserve another wonderful chapter already but perhaps a hint so that we can do it again???? ;) LOL

Can't wait to see how Lucius' plan comes together and what becomes of it all. And I still think there's more to this Jocasta than meets the eye, can't help wondering if she's anything like her namesake. Aww and poor Dramione, missing out on a shag though I suppose it's not exactly one of those mood moments. Darn!! Anyways, LOVED IT!!

Amazing as always. I can't wait for more!

Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Enjoyed that but wish someone was there to help Lucius.

A long while ago I saw this story start. At the time I was still writing mine and kept telling myself I would get to it later. Well, time went by and I guess I simply forgot. The other day I was sitting looking for something to read and your update popped up. Well, thank goodness I decided to read it! Wow! This has been fantastic. And, I must say you have hit on every emotion there is. I love the dynamics of every relationship in it. And, it was made better for me because I didn't have to wait for at least the first 18 chapters. lol Now, I guess I must wait with everyone else, but I am enjoying it enough that it's perfectly fine to do so. :-) Congratulations on a job REALLY well done. Thank you for sharing this story and your talent with us! And, keep it up, please. HG4eva