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I think I might have missed a few chapters, but I really enjoyed this one none the less! :) I love your writing. There is such a natural flow to it and the wit...! :) Very good. I look forward to seeing how it all plays out.

You are an absolutely wonderful writer. I adore your protrayals of all the characters; especially lucias. When the idea of the Italian mob was first introduced I admit that I was a little sceptical but you have pulled it off very well. Please update as soon as possible!

What an amazing story! You are such a wonderful writer, thank you so much for the update, your Lucius is incredibly sexy, wicked, and dominant. I also really like the relationship you've developed between Hermione and Draco. The dynamic between Narcissa and Lucius is so loaded with angst, love, and lots of tension. I can just imagine the explosion between the two of them when they finally are able to come together!

I love this story. Especially the beginning. I would have loved to see more antagonism between Luc and Draco. I was laughing hysterically. Overall good though.

Have I told you how much I love this story!!

I can agree with Lucius there, I must be a deviant because I found him even more hot when he did what he did to Rita. LOL.
Go Him!!

And Kingsley, what a way to turn that over on Rita. *g*

Great as always!!!!

Another great chapter. I look forward to reading the next one.

WOW, just WOW!!! I wonder how on earth you manage to keep all these twisted and confuddled plot lines straight in your head. Honestly, I never know where we're going to end up from one chapter to the next - just the way I like it. That was truly wonderful. I loved Lucius control when he had Rita in his clutches and I like the report' he has going with Shacklebolt. It will be interesting to see how Hermione and Draco react around Daniela and indeed how she reacts to them. I'm rather glad I'm only reading this story and aren't actually 'in it'. Phew!!! As always, WELL DONE!!!!

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The amazing amount of story line that you included in this chapter were wonderful, it caught us up on everyone nearly everyone.

I love Lucius and Narcissa ready to kill to protect each other, I just hope that at some point they will know better.

The kids from Draco's class, Hermione, and Daneille left to his care were all great.

Basically, the entire story was as usualy, wonderful!

Oh, I can't leave out Severus and Albus!

I am looking forward to the next chapter, but RL has to come first and I/we understand that. Take care of yourself and your family, and have a wonderful holiday season! Thanks to much for the present.

I was so excited, please excuse the "usual" misprint. Loving the story!