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for Some Blond Fool

by AndreaLorraine

person wudelfin
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! smut god this is good
person Melissa
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well well well, Hermione Jane Granger is effectivly stringing along three very desirable men. Brilliant writer that you obviously are, you've managed to arrange the situation to allow such antics without making her a 'slut'. Bravo, and I'll be following this with avid intrest.

Update soon. ^^
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon. I know that Hermione and Lucius are pertending to be a couple, but I definately think that he should date Ginny Weasley. I think that Ginny would be better off with him and not Harry because he won't like the fact that she trusts Lucius and Draco with Hermione. I feel that Ron did in fact cheat on Hermione and will stop at nothing to get her back, but I hope she chooses Draco over him.
person janl
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! Ron, right there! Talk about confusion for our Hermione. I love how the 4th chapter shaped up, you're doing a great job, can't wait for more!
person Slytherinprincess113
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It stays in character, but is still funny and modern. I think you have a real talent. I hope to read more very soon (Hint,Hint).
person Citten
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D A M N!!! that was.... great, smokin', wish i were her! :) well what can i say i would want him to sudcess me! too bad ron could not have seen that! it would have been great. (are we sure lucius did not know he was there?) now i would like more please and lots, soon. Please.
person Crystal aka Crys
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. but I'm so upset with this cliffy. I want to know what happens next lol. I love this confusing thing with the malfoys. and I love lucius' character. I hope there's an update soon. =D
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH! You can't leave me hanging like this! I just finished chapter 4 and it is so good. Please update soon!
person mhaj78
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. This is sooo wonderful. Thanks for such great writing, long chapters, totally dead-on emotional responses, and some lovely romantic fluffiness...just enough to melt my heart! I seriously have the hugest smile on my face as I read this story! Okay, except for the first Ginny/Lucius part. Totally cried there.

Anyway, the instant messaging thing was brilliant, totally awesome. Okay, so the GW/LM thing...I really don't have an opinion. My only opinion is that for the love of all that is holy, I can't wait to see DM and HG get together!! You have balanced the perfect amount of angst and interaction and flirtatiousness. It's seriously my new addiction, I'm telling you! I love this story!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"The rest of the world withdrew, isolating her in a bell jar of heartache." That was my favorite line. I'm so impressed with your abilities to come up with such long, well-written chapters so quickly! I can't wait to find out what happened with Ron.