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i loved this story...but i think old lucys gonna get just a tad jelous that someone is playing with his things!

lol update soon!

LadyV

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Quite a quick update! I appreciate your promptness.

So much for paranoia... I'd be willing to bet there arn't many Draco's or Hermione's in Britain, so his previous efforts towards his alias are less than useless.

I can barely picture him all decked out in a soccer uniform, sweating amongst a team of middle aged muggles... he really has normalized. He still manages to be attractive even without the dark glamour, though, so kudos to him and to you for creating this version.

I'm enjoying this, and I'm glad Ron's moved for divorce.

Pity, though, that it doesn't seem the Malfoy's will be fighting over Hermione anytime soon... I'd have thought there'd be more tension if their intentions were honest.

Things to do, toodle-ooo. ^^ Update soon.

Oh my gosh you just made my day PERFECT!!!!! Not only did you update, but you wrote the hottest, most salacious, most wonderfully delicious chapter EVER. I love love love the closing line, too! It just TOTALLY made me smirk. Can you please just write this story all day every day? I absolutely ADORE it.

That was the most...surprising bit of sex I've read! Hot too. I'm SO looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Keep it up!

Gah! I love this story! The smut was hot. And Ron's being an ass....but what else is new? Can't wait to read more....

This was a great chapter. I loved the way Draco let Hermione know just how much he loves her. She was luky to get the divorce from Ron, now she can move on and be happy with Draco. I think Lucius will make a wonderful father-in-law for her. I can't wait to read more soon.

love it love it LOVE IT!!!!!

absolutely fantastic!!! Can't wait for another chapter! I don't see the Lucius/Ginny pairing anymore, but if you go carefully and start Ginny and Harry having problems you could pull it off. I hope that it isn't ending any time soon, this is such a great story there has to be more :)

OMG.....wow. I...yeah. Okay so here it goes, my attempt at speaking english. After the last chapter, I was really falling for Lucius. I loved the character of him. He's always seen in this despicable light and its nice to see his regret. a new side is definitely sexy*love sigh*. And the way he is with Hermione. I adored it. I absolutely loved when he kissed her. I know this is a Hr/D fic, but man oh man for a while there I was wanting her with Lucius, which brings me to my next statement....I think it's horrible what she did in this chapter. I do want her with Draco ultimately, but Lucius opens up to her, is there for her, and then she kind of stabs him in the back, in a matter of speaking. My heart just went out for him. *pout* But I can't wait until the next chapter is up. I'm absolutely loving this fic

oooh girlfriend nice!