rate_review Reviews

Yaaaaaaay! I'm glad how this chapter turned out. In the beginning I was SO irate about Hermione and her semi-scandalous ways. It just didn't seem right for her to "do" both of them. Nice ending to the chapter!!!!

Such a tangled web she weaves... Draco seems enamoured, though I'm personally still reluctant to trust him. It's just a little nagging feeling. Perhaps it has something to do with the way he said he took her advice, that he wasn't going to let her go, and then she finds out he fully intended to. He just reminds me too much of the school age Draco for me to be comfortable with his character...

As for Lucius... well, if she is 'with' Draco, she made the right choice. She really shouldn't play with their affections. One or the other... of course, my own sensibilities flew out the window as soon as he grabbed her. "Internal conflict later, luscious man meat now."

I was completely gob smacked at the end. She was only fantasizing, how cruel. I want her to end up with Lucius. But then, this is a LM/HG fan fic, so they will eventually. I hope that when the time comes, both Lucius and Hermione are sure they want each other, I would hate for Hermione to flitter back to Draco again.

If there's one thing I can't stand, it's wishy washy females, especially when their weakness affects others. My advice to Hermione: Grow some backbone, know your mind. Oh... and get jiggy with Lucius as quickly as possible. I'm impatient.

I'm also only half-conscience. I couldn't sleep, but I think I'm getting there now. Sorry if this review is a bit incoherent, I hope you get the gist. ^^

Love it, can

It's a Draco/Hermione story! Damnit! See, I told you I was delirious...

I was just looking around, seeing if anyone had updated to entertain me during my insomnia... I'd just finished an LM/HG one... and this one had them both. OH DAMNIT! So that means Draco is sincere, and that Lucius will end up... god knows where. OOOooOOOOoh.

It's terrible hard for me to properly literate these frustrated noises... but I hope you get the idea.

Maybe you could... write a spin-off? Take this story down two different roads? One in the DM/HG category one in the LM/HG category? Split it now?

An unlikely scenario... aw poo.

Good thing I took the time to breeze over some other reviews...

DAMNIT!!!

PHWAH!!! .... going all... JR Dallas on us now?

DAMN!

I am absolutely in love with this story! It amazes me how it is so interesting, and how well you are able to write descriptively. Well done. And might I say, thank goodness that you're writing this story. There's only three other stories that I'm reading right now and it's killing me that there are no other good ones being updated and written at this moment. Thanks a million.
Christi

OH HOLY CRAP.

OH MY GOSH.

I am basically sitting here, PANTING, mouth open,...and then the ultimate curveball!! I burst out laughing at myself b/c I was so completely wrapped up in it!! Oh, you just must have had the most evil grin on your face as you finished this chap, didn't you?? ;)

I do love this story. I tried to force myself to read as slowly as possible b/c I just HATED the thought of it being over! I worship these updates, it's just not right, I'm telling you!!

Well, you took the honorable way out, I see! I guess you didn't think Draco would be able to handle the repercussions of the situation. Lovely imagery, however. Wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. :D

You little brat! That was mean. You totally broke my heart. It was totally awesome though. lol Okay so, Lucius is now officially free then? Well, it's only fair to let you know that I stand by my offer to take care of him. *Wink wink* lol Can't wait for more!

In my earlier review, did I mention I actually would have preferred to have Hermione enjoy both Malfoys? Are you experimenting with a triad? Do they even do those? :D