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So, so happy to see an update. Can't wait for the next update! Loved that ending there..... go Narssica. Anyway Hermione meets up with her on the way? Talk about 2 women 'scorned' and it's not like Hr and Rita don't have their own issues (hehehe).

Wow.
Okay, first off, Love General Tso's, MMM yum! :)
And nice follow up to lunch, dessert! Yeah! MOre Dramione action.
But, wait, how could Lucius love her? noooo, sorry, your story :)
Anyway, I only hope that he does his son well and stays away from her. Draco needs to tell his father how he feels about her.
And Hermione really needs to step up and figure her feelings out as well.
Unless they plan to be a happy trio, which I think either man will not agree to.
Oh, and GO NARCISSA! Kick some wizard arse.
LOVING IT!!

A most excellent story so far :) Good plot and the smut is not over the top. Thankyou very much for writing and I hope your RL allows you to continue soon.

Please let him ruin Narcissa's next marriage. They belong together.

i like this no wait let me think......hold on.......no thats right i dont like this I FREAKIN LOVE THIS ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

OK, I've got to tell you, your words truly paint pictures for me. You're doing a wonderful job writing this story. As busy as you are, it's so kind of you to continue updating this. I look for new chapters every time I'm here. Good luck on your ethics papers & I hope to read more of this soon.

Well! A great chapter, and so the mystery deepens! Can't wait to see if Narcissa and Lucius get back together! And to see what else happens! :D

OMG!!!!!! That was amazing! The best chapter so far. You made Draco the type of guy every woman wants in her bed! BRAVO!

I think I'm going to die if I have to go two weeks without an update for this story!! I am totally and completely addicted...I look every day for an update. I hate it when real life gets in the way! ;)

This was another great chapter--you have written it very well, I feel like I'm sitting right there with them, watching Hermione's face react as she realizes what's going on behind the curtain! LOL So Lucius and Narcissa...awww...even if this doesn't mean they're going to get back together, I'm glad they could at least "help each other out". I'm looking forward to watching this develop. Good luck with your classes and assignments!!

I think you are a great writer. One of the best detail- and content-oriented writers on aff.net.

I am torn. I liked the storyline where Hermione had to choose between lucious Lucius and devastatingly wonderful Draco. With Narcissa back in the story, we can't get back to the wildness that entailed nor can we think through why Draco is the better choice. Death Eater status aside, Lucius is kind of a neat character. He is dramatic, vicious, and endearing. What can't he do? Draco can only fight against expectations and impressions of his character.

Great job.