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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Consider this love sent. Thank you for the wonderful new chapter!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My. Two chapters! The first one was. . .very detailed. I can't believe you put that much time and effort into this fic to make a family tree. :) Nicely done!
And the fight between Harry and well, the pummeling of Lucius was rather, mean. Poor Ginny. She had to tell him knowing exactly what he would do. To bad she didn't make him take a blood oath rather than just a promise.
And Draco, he needs to give himself more credit, hello, she is with him, she just had to leave when he was angry! She isn't having sex with Potter! silly git.
Narcissa really needs to watch out for herself, Lucius has two more yrs before he can get his wand back and if she gets hurt/killed because she was trying to avenge him, well, that won't end well.
Okay, obviously you've got me sucked into this story something fierce.
Keep up the very intense work and see ya next round!
And the fight between Harry and well, the pummeling of Lucius was rather, mean. Poor Ginny. She had to tell him knowing exactly what he would do. To bad she didn't make him take a blood oath rather than just a promise.
And Draco, he needs to give himself more credit, hello, she is with him, she just had to leave when he was angry! She isn't having sex with Potter! silly git.
Narcissa really needs to watch out for herself, Lucius has two more yrs before he can get his wand back and if she gets hurt/killed because she was trying to avenge him, well, that won't end well.
Okay, obviously you've got me sucked into this story something fierce.
Keep up the very intense work and see ya next round!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your portrayal of Narcissa! I've never read a fic in which she is so ultimately a bad ass and I love it.
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is PURE GENIUS. Please please please update...I was shocked to see it had only been a week since you last did--but I feel like I'm missing part of my soul w/o an update for SBF! :) Okay, a bit overly dramatic. But seriously, this is an amazing story, just wanted to leave you some encouragement to let you know it's loved!!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story. Great job!!!
I thought Hermione's fantasy about Lucius was really interesting and really well done.
Harry broke his promise to Ginny =(
Can't wait for more!!
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story. Great job!!!
I thought Hermione's fantasy about Lucius was really interesting and really well done.
Harry broke his promise to Ginny =(
Can't wait for more!!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter....being half northern Italian myself (mother was Venetian), I enjoyed the faux history lesson. Keep up the good work. And hopefully, Harry won't whale too badly on Lucius. Hopefully. :D
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think chapter seven killed me. No it didn't just kill me, it snatched me up in the middle of the night, curb stomped me, shot me in the leg to be spiteful and then killed me. I loved it so much though! And that line! "Oh, what I would have done to you." (sorry if I didn't do it justice) It reminded me of Sense and Sensibility when Brendon (as played by Alan Rickman in the '95 movie version) says, "The air is full of spices." Just that hot, sex appeal.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nonononononononono harry sit harry stay bad harry very bad. damn it why wont he listen. aww shit i dont want to know whats gonna happen next *dives under couch* oh who am i kidding *runs back and throws self into computer chair* i'm dying to find out what happens
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yikes indeed! That Rita is SO going to get what's coming to her, and I can't wait!
So relieved to see Lucius really is alright now. I love the way you've portrayed him in this story.
Hoping you keep Harry and Ginny together. They feel right.
So relieved to see Lucius really is alright now. I love the way you've portrayed him in this story.
Hoping you keep Harry and Ginny together. They feel right.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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first things first: how do you get the tab to work when you upload? I can't tab my paragraphs and it drives me mad! Can you put up instructions in a later chapter explaining how? Please? Pretty Please?
I think its a common thing among the fanfic writers that RW/HG would not work; it boggles the mind that JKR would pair the brightest witch of the age with someone who isn't the shiniest cauldron in the cupboard. Ron would drive her mad with his attitude and probably be intimidated by her intelligence! Hermione would need a bloke with a brain, and that is a rather short list. Though, it is a shame that his adultery was caught by Rita Skeeter, though perhaps it is for the best; Hermione could have ended up with goodness-knows-what disease after his amorous undertakings elsewhere! Ron should have had the guts to end it before going after a different woman.
Ginny's reaction 'What has my brother done now' was priceless! And Harry's reasoning over his emotions was brilliant and kept perfectly in character!
Lucius as the business man is hardly surprising - I presume they lost the Manor or are banned from living there for a while? Though, he would have to have an i-phone, and as they're exclusive to one network in the UK and with no competition from other companies they're rediculously expensive! I wonder when he got the hang of the internet, the computer, the TV... evidently LM is very adaptable to his situations.
The kiss at the end - that has certainly given the public something to think about - though Rita will probably twist it into something so much worse!
11/10!
first things first: how do you get the tab to work when you upload? I can't tab my paragraphs and it drives me mad! Can you put up instructions in a later chapter explaining how? Please? Pretty Please?
I think its a common thing among the fanfic writers that RW/HG would not work; it boggles the mind that JKR would pair the brightest witch of the age with someone who isn't the shiniest cauldron in the cupboard. Ron would drive her mad with his attitude and probably be intimidated by her intelligence! Hermione would need a bloke with a brain, and that is a rather short list. Though, it is a shame that his adultery was caught by Rita Skeeter, though perhaps it is for the best; Hermione could have ended up with goodness-knows-what disease after his amorous undertakings elsewhere! Ron should have had the guts to end it before going after a different woman.
Ginny's reaction 'What has my brother done now' was priceless! And Harry's reasoning over his emotions was brilliant and kept perfectly in character!
Lucius as the business man is hardly surprising - I presume they lost the Manor or are banned from living there for a while? Though, he would have to have an i-phone, and as they're exclusive to one network in the UK and with no competition from other companies they're rediculously expensive! I wonder when he got the hang of the internet, the computer, the TV... evidently LM is very adaptable to his situations.
The kiss at the end - that has certainly given the public something to think about - though Rita will probably twist it into something so much worse!
11/10!