rate_review Reviews

P.S. I adore that Lucius and Narcissa are still in love, I love the mafia angle (and I've not seen anyone think of that before, so well done!) and I think what you've done with Rita Skeeta is fantastic

your writing is wonderful! each character is complex and well developed, the dialogue is fantastic, and the plot is intricate without being confusing. thank you for writing this and i hope you find the time and inspiration to continue the story someday.

I do so love your writing. I hope that someday soon you can finish all of your WIP's.

Chapter 2-I am laughing over the im's between Draco and Hermione. Oh, you are so tempting with the possible theft of teh ladies from Ron and Harry. I do hope you pursued that. I would enjoy reading it.

Chapter 9-It is nice to see Narcissa written as a woman and a mother instead of a simpering bore. Rita and her cameraman should be scared. Mu ha ha ha

Chapter 21-Marvelous! I hope you're not comfortable?
Let's see. I got the mob(BTW, I love the Sopranos), Draco & Hermione, Lucius with Narcissa who is not a stuck up snob, and the best thing of all**Rita Skeeter in the loony bin**
Excellent!

Holy Slytherin this is good! Please continue soon. Im entranced. Great work.

Why? Oh why? have you not continued this story? It's amazing, it is in no way predictable and is very well written. I also have read more Fan Fiction than I care to admit and you have some of the best written smut scenes I have ever read in the HP FF world, I can only think of a few that compare in the Twilight FF genre and that's only cause there isn't that much to work with story wise in that series besides romance. I do hope you plan to continue this mystery it is a page turner...umm screen change....whatever, I'm sure you get it. Thanks for the good read either way.

With hundreds of other reviews before mine there shouldn't be too much left for me to say. Of course I have enjoyed it immensely and look forward to how you will resolve all the loose ends. The whole magical mafia thing is outstanding as is your insight as to how characters like Lucius and Draco could change and grow. This is one of those rare fanfiction pieces that could easily be transformed onto a non-fanfic novel by changing the names of the characters as well as names of places and things that reference the writing of JKR. Should you ever decide that is something you would consider please contact me privately.

Oh no .. I just read this whole story in one sitting. I need to know what happens! Pls, update soon!!