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for Some Blond Fool

by AndreaLorraine

schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I think that person Hermione wants for a threesome is Lucius. I hope that Draco will let her have her wish. I hope that whatever the parchment says, that nothing will happen to Lucius or Draco.
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, what a cliff! Way to leave the readers begging for more. On Harry presenting Lucius with a puppy, some of Ginny's comments to Hermione, and Viktor giving Harry a 5 second head start, I was giggling like a loon. And, of course, I'm dying to find out how Narcissa is going to react when she finds out just whose children she's babysitting. Pretty damned inventive story you've got here. Can't wait for the next installment.
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Delicious! Welcome back!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any idea how much I have missed this story!? Ahh! And a threesome is Hermione's fantasy eh? Does it make make me a bad bad girl the first person I'd want to add to the mix is Lucius? *Ducks and hides* Is that just me? lol Great update! I can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!!
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I lost track of the day because I was so enjoyably immersed in your wonderful story. :) I loved the G spot comment. I can totally understand Hermione being lost in that moment of passion and thinking that way. I have never seen Footballers Wives so I guess those jokes went over my head but I love Doctor Who so when I got to that part I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair. And I love that Hermione got to shag both Malfoys. It's times like these that I wish I was a fictional chaacter. LMAO

Good luck with your studies although I do hope you can update soon.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more....please..*offers oreos*....fabulous story....please please more
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
for some reason i forgot completely about this story! how i regret it!

its brilliant and i cant wait for more!
person luvhp
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, thanks for the update!!! And the Dramione lovin' and the Lucius ponderings, and the Mob Drama, LOL
Good for Cissa, letting the girls in, and smart woman to use her maiden name!
I'm still a bit lost with the whole 'family' but it's okay, I'm sure I'll figure it out before the end draws near :)
person bean1498
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is wonderful! :) I love you! Your scenes are so dramatic and smooth...and the sex! Oh my God! So sensual and creative. :) I can't wait to see what happens. :)
person bean1498
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ! That was just...gah! Lucius in the shower! I normally don't go for Lucius fics, because he's a bit of a prick, but this I'm totally digging! Your writing is smooth and sensual and so fun to read. I just wanted to stop after that chapter and say, THANK YOU for sharing your writing with us. Bless you. :)
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