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for Some Blond Fool

by AndreaLorraine

person classsic
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this update!!! I just remembered how much I love this fic and I can't stop myself from rambling on. Anyways, I've reviewed before but I don't think I've mentioned that this is my favorite Lucius / Narcissa fic and one of my Draco / Hermione. I loved how Lucius and his "wife" evolved since Voldemort's downfall. His actions are well justified and his punishment was realistic. Every twist and turn in the story makes me like Lucius more as a character and this hasn't happened with me from reading any other fic. I also love Draco and Lucius's bond. Its really sweet how they care so much for each other that they would give up hermione for the other.

But directing more to chapter 17: thank god Lucius figured out that it wasn't Narcissa. At first I was a bit shocked that she would do that, but I immediately thought Polyjuice. Thanks for giving Rita the punishment she deserves. Draco's scenes with his doctorate classmates are great too. That German guy is definitely a jerk.

Sorry for the rambling. I can't wait for more!!!
person Gardengirl
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how Arthur finally shut Ron up! That was priceless. Looking forward to Lucius sorting all this out - I hope your muse is well supplied with chocolate/whatever she demands.
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha! brilliant! im totally in love with this story and can't wait for the next. Please update ASAP!!!!!!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew the whole time it wasn't Narcissa. Well, not the whole time, it was when Lucius noticed the coldness in her eyes that I realized it was that bitch Skeeter. I hope someone stomps on her when she's in her bug form. Anyway, this was fantastic from the start and it keeps getting better and better. This is one of the best fics out there. Oh, I also loved the interaction betwen Arthur and Lucius. "In that case, I am still unconscious" Too funny!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i really like this chap! Lucius seemed to have a thing with hospital lately lol

i also love this

"...I am happy if Hermione is happy, and from what I can tell, the only thing making her unhappy right now is you.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank Merlin someone finally shut Ron up! LOL! That boy never learns.

Great story-centered chapter. Love the war of the words between Rita and Narcissa. And the spat between Draco and that other guy was great too. It was good to see Draco give it to someone again!

I have to admit I am a bit confused with all these Mafia people, but I just go with the flow. They're all pretty much bad guys anyway, right? =)

After reading some of the other reviews, I have to agree with the person who said they were almost disappointed that Hermione chose Draco. I love Dramione, don't get me wrong, but the chemistry between Hermione and Lucius was fabulous. And the idea of a threesome with them should probably squick me, but it doesn't. I actually think that would be pretty damn hot! LOL!
person ilke
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Arthur! Go Arthur! What a great scene between him and Lucius! And I loved Draco walking into a sea of redheads. And THANK GOD that it WASN'T Narcissa! I was seriously concerned for a sec there. I can't wait to see them end up back together (um, if that's what you have planned). Oh and I loved Harry staring down Ron! Rock on!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think that would be quite amusing, actually... i must say, so far this is the smuttyless (that's not even a word but work with me, lol) story i've read on this site! i'm quite liking it!
person kazfeist
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hah! What a wonderful surprise to see that this is up! Please email me when you update again....kazfeist at gmail dot com, if you please! I love the interaction and the way you've set up canon characters in your own little universe! :D