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for Pain of the Innocent

by Emptyinside

person landra
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!! I hope you update soon!!^^
person Bones
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. i really like this story, good that Harry-Vince has some good friends to stick by him no matter what.
person kunitsu
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm interesting, I would love to see more of this. Update soon
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please...this is really good so far...update soon please...
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I'm curious what's going to happen. Keep it up.
person Jan
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor kid, having to go through hell and back at such an early age, I feel for him.

I like this story very much. Please update chapter 6 soon ^_^

Jan
person alma
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person poohbear74
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a good start and everything
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. Update soon please.
person Wendy
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I'd choose Dante. I've always liked that name after playing Devil May Cry.
My favorite clip from that game series is that of him taunting a certain giant three headed dog called Cerebrus, here is the link if you want to see it on youtube ... ... ...
http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=Igc9TvBv390&feature=related
That my reason as to why I like that name. Otherwise I think you have got a good story there. Please continue.

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