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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
e-mail me an update please!oreo.fanfiction@live.com
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more I need to know what happens as he grows up.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good, except for the fact that it lacks description. I mean, there is description, but it's vague and there's not much of it. What kind of tree was it? How big was the lake? How big was the property? All this can help the reader understand what you are trying to convey. On another note, there is clearly a plot. Worth reading, and reviewing... =D hope I help!
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April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
in all truth.
I am warry of stories from this section. mostly because the authors here usually write great stuff! but then... they cease to update, hardly every complete. =(
but I'm reading this nonetheless. for research. if not anything else.
I like you're reasoning to justify harry's place with voldermort. =)
I am warry of stories from this section. mostly because the authors here usually write great stuff! but then... they cease to update, hardly every complete. =(
but I'm reading this nonetheless. for research. if not anything else.
I like you're reasoning to justify harry's place with voldermort. =)
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh this seems like a really good story. Update soon please!!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it will be interesting to see what happens when Harry/Vince turns 11. Will the letter from Hogwarts get through? Will it go to Petunia and never reach Harry? I feel as if these two friends of his will help him not to become dark but maybe not? So many questions, please update soon. Love the story
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome. please update soon. i cant wait to what happens when he gets older. i like the story but i think i should be speeded up cause i might loose interest really fast and i dont want that to happen. email me when you update pretty please! love it so far :) Jen-El
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, I was wondering is Harry going to be dark in this story, I hope so, also I didnt know how to vote so I thought that you just do it in the review so I vote for Dante I like that name, hope you update the story soon, good work.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor vince/harry, i have to say that those british social service people are bitches. you may want to change a few things there. there's probually guidelines that the Social services have to follow before they put a child in an orphanage and they would never strike a child. please update soon *kisses*
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool story, its going really well. i'm glad harry has made some good friends and i hope he'll teach that prat a lesson :)