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for Visited Upon the Son

by Sparkykiki

person kazfeist
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was beautifully done! :D
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the tip about the copywrite thing. =) thiswas a very good chapter. i likethat draco was honest with his response to neville's questions, i also like that he was able to surprise Hermione with a ring. sweet and tender and definitely moving the happy couple in the right direction. looking forward to chapter 20!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww. with every chapter I read this story gets better. I love this story! Great job!!!
person Rosamund
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter....it wasn't a surprise to us readers, but I'm sure Hermione was surprised (at least a bit ;)
person kazfeist
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, she's really being an ostrich, isn't she? Hope Draco will be the persevering guy we all know he is. :D
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, just read this from chapter one...i honestly thought i hadn't read it before until i got to the end of chapter 9 and saw that you had responded to one of my reviews...felt kinda stupid then for not realizing...lol. anyway, this story has progressed very well from when i last read it. i'm glad hermione finally told him and i am glad that neville was there for her and told her to give draco some time to take it all in. your doing a fantastic job with this story...keep it up, can't wait to read more...

LadyB

P.S.
how do you make the little copyright symbol?
person kazfeist
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two very important chapters, I know. Now that Hermione and Draco both have some insight in what happened to her, they need to start communicating. Hope you update soon. :D
person Rosamund
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job once again! Blaise mom went to muggle university? how interesting!
person kazfeist
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! I'm glad she finally told the truth. I can see why Draco's disgust at his father would have confused her. She's still not in her right mind, thinking that somehow her rape was her 'fault'. Hopefully, Draco will convince her that she's wrong. Update soon, so I know I'm right! :D
person Rosamund
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome update...thanks for updating again so soon!