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wow what a big step for them i loved this chap hell i love this story i can not wait to read about neville and lunas wedding i am sure that will be quite the event and i hope that hermione and draco are able to become closer... great job

Great update..its wonderful to see hermione slowly opening up to the intimate side of her relationship with draco. i think you are hadling that very well. draco is a wonderful man for understanding what she needs, even if it does get 'hard' for him on occasion. =) looking forward to more!!!

Lady B
xoxo

Thought I would give the grown up version a try! V sexy! Well to your betta and you this is a great story. Give your muse a tickle for me.

ok so i have just jumped on the bandwagon of reading this story for some reason i missed it... i like this first chap so far... i think that you have captured the true emotion that would have gone along with harry and rons death.... i wonder though about the beginning flashback when she was held captive i wonder if you are going to go into more detail about that??? well i guess there is only one way to find out...

Ha..just typed my whole review and it dissappeared, so excuse me if you get this twice. I really love your story, it is sweet and angsty and all those things that keep me reading, so congrats! I started it last night and read thru 25 chapters in one sitting..it really kept me going. I noticed a couple of errors (I think - you're the author, maybe I'm misinterepting) that aren't the silly grammer one's, which are easily ignored. First, you mention Percy twice in the 23rd (the wedding) chapter, but I'm pretty sure you killed him off in the first (right?), also you say that Hermione has been teaching her seventh years since their second year at Hogwarts, which would have her wrapping up her sixth year teaching. If the war was five years ago at the beginning of the story, and the job was offered to her after she tried to commit suicide one year after, she'd be starting her fourth year teaching at that point (the beginning of the narrative, I mean)- just cross reference to the age of the twins, since one year and nine months is not that far off. I hope you don't think I'm picking on you, I think you'd want to know-or maybe I missed something, and you can correct me-it happens. I really do love the story and can't wait for an update...good work, keep it up!

I'm in Spain right now, with limited internet access, so I have to make it brief-
This chapter,as the rest of the story was, was fantastic. Thanks for the compliment about the pen name, lol
Keep Writing, thank you for this great story,

Regards,
InBedWithSoviets

hi!!
I was soo excited that I saw a new chapter up. I love this story!!!
Keep up the awesome work!!! cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!

I just read this whole entire story for the first time (I can't believe I missed it!), and it is truly amazing. The plot is wonderful, the grammer is neat, and the characters are perfect. The whole marrige law idea was a little out of the blue, but then there wouldn't be a story. Great job, please update soon! -Alle

more please more this is a wonderful story :)

Haha, children in a wedding rarely works out, my cousins started fighting with each other in their brother's wedding too. Not a ton of action in this chapter, but I love this story and can't WAIT to read more H/D!! :)