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for Visited Upon the Son

by Sparkykiki

person kazfeist
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, and I like that you've reunited Draco with the Blacks. Teddy could be Ring Bearer! :D
person monkey-mama
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bribes work! This was great, can't wait for the wedding andhe honeymoon....
person kazfeist
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always like wedding scenes. I think one of the typos got by your betas, though....you meant 'quaking', not 'quacking' in the line: her body was quaking...Right? :D Other than that, I like Hermione's continued healing process. Very realistic.
person jocat
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just bite her back! Great chappie.
person Alle
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh finally! lol i'm glad for draco... and for hermione. shes so sweet, and she dosent deserve to be tortured by her memories. the wedding picture was beautiful, and i continue to love the characters! great job!
person smmz79
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this chap... I am so glad that hermione is overcoming her fears and flashbacks... what a great love scene in the beginning and hermione took the lead.. i think that shows that she trusts draco more and more... great wedding i loved the conversation between the boys poor lee with ginnys weird cravings... can not wait for the next chap great job....
person Alle
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I'm glad that hermione is getting better... it seems like she really took a bigger step in this chapter. I can't wait to hear about the wedding and maybe a little more action between them. Draco must be dying! -Alle
person InBedWithSoviets
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all, great chapter, which goes without saying at this point... :)

Secondly, I'm from NYC, but I have mainly Russian ancestry, with a little bit of Mexican, Romanian, and English. Yourself?
person kazfeist
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked it....can't wait for the rest. :D
person smmz79
schedule July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am reading this whole story in one night and i must say that i really like it.... i love how you have draco in this story how the war has changed him and how having to decided a fate for his mother has made him view the world differently i love how understanding he is with hermione

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