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for Visited Upon the Son

by Sparkykiki

person dumbum
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Luna is a year behind Neville. Geez, if you aren't going to bother getting the lingo, the characters, the facts, or the rules of a universe right, why bother writing in the universe? Why not just write original fiction?
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww im am soooo sooo sooo sad to see this story end. it was brilliant! i love reading it. but i can reread it whenever i want. great job!!!
person smmz79
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a great ending and a perfect b-day gift you posted it on my b-day so thanks... :) LOVED IT LOVED IT.... what a perfect anniversary gift for Draco and Hermione.... great job!!!!
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww.. wow.. this chapter was great.. it had everything in one, wedding / birth/ sex...
wow great job!!
person kazfeist
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A truly beautiful ceremony, and they, at long last, consummated the relationship! Good for them! :D
person smmz79
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah you posted i am doing a happy dance... ok o really that was awesome... the handfasting was perfect and i had a funny feeling that ginny would go into labor during the wedding sometime... i laughed when she said 'you are doing this the next time lee' that was funny... great story totally... i cannot wait for the final chap but i am sad that it is ending... loved it great job!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it cheating if i review more than once... i mean really you said that you were not going to post the next chap until you got 15 reviews well i am giving you 2 and if you do not update in 2 days then i am going to review again:) yes i know i am playing dirty but i really like your story and i am excited about your update....
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww great chapter. I love this story very much!!
keep up the wonderful work!!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read their wedding! Hermione deserved him!! and i really like ur story very much...keep updating!
person smmz79
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great chap... i am sooo happy that draco is making peace with his family esp the ones that his father did not accept... i thought it was funny when hermione got all dreamy about their own vows and draco just rolled his eyes that was funny and very fitting for his personalty.. i love how you have him as a changed person but there are little things that you kept about him and i like that it adds to his charm... i loved ginny in this mostly tha tpart where she just walked into hermiones house and was like do not get pregnant that was funny i can almost imagine her waddling throughout the house

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