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for Visited Upon the Son

by Sparkykiki

person jldcat
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know where this is going and I think I love it.....nope, I know I love it....LOL
person skydancer
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ummm... hate to throw a wobbly into the plot..... but would dumping the memories in a pensieve help?
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor draco!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I dont know who to feel worse for Draco or Hermione.
person jldcat
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chapter 5 on this site and scooted over to fanfiction.net to read Chapter 6..LOL

I am really enjoying your story. I'm really new to fan fiction of any sort and am continuosly surpised by the talent of the writers, yourself included of course.

I would like to ask why there are only 6 chapters up when you have 15 written? Is there a limit to what you can upload or is it to wait and see the reviews for each chapter? Just curious.

Thank God for bookmarks..HAHA Can't wait for chaper 7.
person skydancer
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely little bit of work here. Draco is in for a bit of a ride I suspect. I can't wait to delve into the next chapters!
person janl
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's shaping up pretty good. I'm curious to find out how Draco will actually 'come clean' with Hermione, so to speak, about his regrets? I look forward to reading more.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!!!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far. It has a really got plot and yoy portray the caracters beautifully! Keep up the goos work!!
person Anon
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I am kind of curious if she will have a flashback of what Lucius did to her. But please continue!