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@12 i love this story and i hope that you get some ideas for continuing because its a great story!

*DB*

I like it. Please update soon.

I absolutely love this story. I do not think that it is getting stagnant at all, but I can see where you are coming from. The last chapter was amazing, and I would love to see some resolution between Hermione and Severus and their issues, I believe if the two of them united against Voldemort they would be a formidable team. I am not sure how many ideas I have off the top of my head right now, but if you would like to e mail me I would love to swap some with you. I really would hate to see this story abandoned, it is a really great piece of work! My e mail is aerocherry22@hotmail.com. Good luck!

I think your story is great and not boring.. As for what to write to continue: I think that since Severus has technically raped Hermione, she could either find herself pregnant and demand that he help raise the child, find herself pregnant and tell him to stay away from her and the child, then run away to avoid him, or she could go to Dumbledore and try and get him sacked. I think the first two options would be better because of the fact that Severus is a spy and it would be crucial for him to remain at Hogwarts. If option two would be used, then he could try and track her down so that they could be together, because he could realize that he truly loves her and wants to be with her. It may take a few months or years before he find her, but when he does he would be able to confess his feelings for her. I hope that you are able to continue this story.

your inconsistancies are starting to confuse me. In chapter 4, she is supposed to add a cup of POWDERED carapaces, and instead she chops them and the potion turns out fine! Then later he tells her to go take her bath and come see him when she is done, but when she does so,she is confused as to why she went and checked on him.

I've never been the best at sticking with the longer stories either, so I know exactly how you feel. Oneshots are my world :)

I don't have any ideas, but I do wish you the best of luck!

-IncaShine

Hello! I just read your author's note. I understand just how you feel, I'm at the same place with Lilies--and Snivellus Avenged... and Chance Encounters. I'll write two chapters at a time and feel really good about it, then I'll post some -stuff- and then I'm done, for a week at a time. My best advice? Take a vacation from Brewing Glory--write another oneshot, or just take a break. I think it's been good thus far, certainly not the most sporadic fic I've read on here lately. If you feel like a major overhaul is in order, take it slow.

I don't have any ideas just yet, maybe I'll re-read. Seriously though, just take your time. Trust me, we'll wait. :-)

Hi,
this story is getting really hot,but I wonder how Severus will explain his strange behaviour to Hermione.(((H)))Sureves Epans

This chapter was great. I hope that Hermione will be alright wherever Severus took her. Hopefully he didn't take her to Voldemort because if he did she is really going to hate him. I look forward to reading more soon.

i love it!! on the edge of my seat with what will happen next...does Voldy still want her? was snape just seducing her bc he felt like it and then feelings got in the way or does he have an ulterior motive??