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for If These Walls Could Cry

by BadkatPat

schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was very haunting, very spooky... and beautiful ... and scary... and... yum. What a way for Lucius to go, too! (And oddly enough, a few times I found myself almost cheering for him, his hate was that contageous.) As for Harry "defiling" Draco... hehehe.... that was just lovely.
person Navy
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A little shakey at the start, but you soon get back into the swing of things! Your work really makes me smile, even when it's dark!

Your twists, turns and perfect insight into the character's thoughts amaze me in every way.

Perfect ending, absolutely amazing!

I love your style - you answer so many questions, and yet create so many more.

I love it!!!!
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was 'extremely' well done. I don't even know what to say about it. It was an absolutely perfect effort from start to finish. I'm so impressed! Bravo!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an unusual concept and plot. Excellently written, very emotive and poignant.

Great piece of work!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! I think the jailer was right!
person ice owl
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an incredible reading experience. It really had me intrigued from beginning to end, and although I would have liked to see Lucius live and be a better person this really was so much more in-character for him.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg so awesome. i mean just fantastic!
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. I like how it goes into Lucius's point of view but we see the intimacy and love between Harry and Draco. It's really kinda heartbreaking but sexy at the same time. Great writing : )