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for Innocence Impaired

by damnedphoenix156

schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Kills the bastards who hurt the two little children* good story though
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... so they stumbled into the world of magic on their own? Interesting.
person anniea
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey where is this one going?
i would really like to know please update soon. *kisses*
person sanda
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Harry brought his friend back from the dead using (unknowingly) magic and now they've become a pair of runaway thieves? I really like where this story is going and I can't wait for you to continue it! Although I must admit I feel a slight feeling of foreboding knowing that if the wizardding world does catch up with young potter, he's not going to want to be separated from his sister no matter how great of an opportunity it is for him.

Looking forward to your next update! Keep up the good work!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
How did Harry bring her back to life?
ANd when is the wizarding world gonna start looking for Harry?
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! So sad ;.;..what happens next?!?!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm hooked. Hoping for more soon; answers included! Until the next chapter! :)
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just.. I actually started crying! Why are your chapters so short? You are SUCH a good writer. I could just read what you write all day. I saw how few reviews you had and knew that you were going to be a good author the good ones never seem to get many reviews people seem to think they don't need encouragement or something. -shrug- You are really really good the only thing I would say is work on length other then that I will just have to go... Wow.
KP