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by eyesuhkattspeleeng

schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How sad that proff Sane obliviate her memory... hawever she is pregnant, and sme how Snape will know it in the end some day sooner or later.
Please update soon, love to know the end. XXXDDD
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you really nailed Snape's mindset. The internal dialogue/discourse seems to be so spot on with his character. What I really like is that I can't tell where this is going, if it's going to be a simple story line or something more complex as evidenced by the attempted suicide at the begining. And I don't care either way because it's written so well. Good on you.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If this is your first story, I can't wait to read more.