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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Definately worth the wait!!! :-)
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. The Epilogue brought tears to my eyes. Well worth the wait, having followed you here from FF.net.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At first you say that the girl is having sex with parkinson's father but at the end of this chapter she is a virgin, the continuity error is rather jarring.
Good sex scene anyway.
Good sex scene anyway.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, brought tears to my eyes, this story did... Very well written! Bravo!
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October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing I just finished Part One. I must say it is a little sad how little compassion Snape holds for Evelyn. I don't think she's just a whore. Perhaps I don't understand...I liked how she does act realistically like someone does when their young and was sexually abused. Evelyn is smart and manipulative, yet an idea would have been good if Snape had tried to make her more submissive. Maybe spanking? Doubt it'd work on her. I liked how he shagged her before Draco walked in. Good introspective writin. You get into both characters minds. Even if it was still primarily Snapes POV.
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I read chapter one...so far really good...I hope they're relationship develops. She really has a lot of guts. I loved how she dared to touch him when asking for the higher grade! Have you read any of my stories? I hope you can R&R one...if not I'll still review this.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Its great to see them back together again. I'm so annoyed with her for being with Draco, I can't understand her being that foolish, but, at least he's being nice at the moment. I still feel really glad she's back with Severus again.
Best
Kitty
Its great to see them back together again. I'm so annoyed with her for being with Draco, I can't understand her being that foolish, but, at least he's being nice at the moment. I still feel really glad she's back with Severus again.
Best
Kitty
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really, really wish I hadn't read this chapter; the next wont be out soon enough! Great new addition, I can't wait to find out what happens with Severus and Evelyn (I don't think I worded that right, but you know what I mean).
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes, this chapter was a little bit strange, she could have been more gratefull or at least more open-minded , since severus is her husband now. Sorry but I din
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent addition! Actually, in my opinion, the bit of Jealousy on Severus' part fit perfectly though that's not exactly how it came off to me. It doesn't seem to me, anyway that she was 'raped', after all Severus DID obliviate her, hence she has no memory of it; anyone would act that way in that situation and I don't think her reaction towards him should have been done any differently. This entire chapter fits perfectly considering the situation. Please do update soon!!