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for To Protect and...Service

by TheCoven

schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You people are fucking twisted :D

I only remembered what day it is when I read the very last line. Jesus. For a while there I thought you'd had collective nervous break down and decided to call it quits and go out with a bang.

Phew. Can't wait for the real next chapter.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The entire time I read this I was like 'You have got to be fucking kidding me!!' Thank god it was fake I almost had a cow!! You guys are horrible! Scared the crap out of me! <.< Hahaha...good one guys!
person Roxy
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I knew this wasn't a real chapter, it was just too warped. I guess I still got pranked, I was expecting this to be a dream of draco's. Thanx for the laugh though.
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the first thing I thought was "WHAT THE F***!?!?!?"
then I scrolled down and...

Well, great joke! You had me!!! :D
Can't wait for tomorrow :P
person Ellanath
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez I am going to need a cold shower! No make that an ice bath! Man, talk about HOT!
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was lovely! *sighs* I agree with you! I swear everytinme those two fight I just wanna laugh cause I know in like five seconds they will be on each other like white on bread! Hahaha! Exellent job guys keep up the good work!
person tas
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice SP. made me want to read more....longer chapter from you. LOL. Angst was great. A jealous Draco will be nice to see...make him realize how he feels.

~tas
person SP777
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, so much for same-themed titles...
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about #4...

I like the direction this story is going, Miss Nikki [I think] did a good job.

I can 'see' already the problem Draco is going to have with Theo, when he admits the
attraction he feels for Harry. Theo is going to hex him into next week, once
he stops yelling. :-)
person Triden
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I lopve this story! The plot is fantastic, the story is well- written, the characters are pretty well in- character! All in all you have hooked me with your writing! I want more....please?
person caroll
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Th