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for To Protect and...Service

by TheCoven

schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gabbie, that was too funny. I saw the email and was like..what? The end...?? Then I went to the chapter and I didn't even get a chance to read it before I saw the fin...uh oh. LOL.
Funny.

And I can always tell when you add stuff to my writing. LOL. Stop being anal! I'm joking love...
person Extraho
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of course i'm not mad....you did give me a fright though *rolls eyes*

~extraho
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww our poor boys!! so in love and they don't know it! sigh, i hope this figure it out soon...
person Milva
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I being late and I didn't read the fake chapter (lucky for me xD). It was a nice and bit crazy idea to made this joke xD Maybe it won't be funny if I read it and believed in it xD Btw, we celebrate this day in Poland and it called here "Prima aprilis", it's a latin name ;)Wait for the next, this time real chapter ;)
person Triden
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....... I really hate you right now... wait, I'm sure that's not all...no... that's it.
person anon
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not funny!
person Extraho
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh fucking hell. yeahm it fooled me. geez, th`t was mean??!!!!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!! YOU SO FUCKIN' GOT ME!!!!! AND I FELL FOR IT! ARRGG!

Great job, btw. Glad this isn't the real end of the story!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice one!!!
person Timer18
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol!!! oh man i really thought thts how the story ended