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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story at skyhawke and I'm happy you completed it. It is very good story and I'm looking forward to the sequel.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh dear god. i LOVED IT!!!!!
a story with a PLOT AND A SUBPLOT and characters that actually seemed REAL, god i love how you write. i was redused to squeaking like a fan girl (which is quite out of charater for me) but you had me falling off my seat a couple of times.
for example "and laura madley suddenly dives, did she see the --DEATH EATERS!"
or "I know dark hexes that would make grindelwald flinch. don't tempt me."
and my favorite was "so that was that, then, and about as likely to happen again as flitwick marrying hagrid's mother."
so because i'm know for inserting random things that amuse me into what ever i'm talking about, those have found there way into my vocabulary.
ok enough of me being long winded but i can't wait for your sequel.
if you have an email list kindly add me at serpensortia06@gmail.com,
or i'll just be checking in ever week or so.
congratulations at this wonderful addition to the writers world.
serpensortia
a story with a PLOT AND A SUBPLOT and characters that actually seemed REAL, god i love how you write. i was redused to squeaking like a fan girl (which is quite out of charater for me) but you had me falling off my seat a couple of times.
for example "and laura madley suddenly dives, did she see the --DEATH EATERS!"
or "I know dark hexes that would make grindelwald flinch. don't tempt me."
and my favorite was "so that was that, then, and about as likely to happen again as flitwick marrying hagrid's mother."
so because i'm know for inserting random things that amuse me into what ever i'm talking about, those have found there way into my vocabulary.
ok enough of me being long winded but i can't wait for your sequel.
if you have an email list kindly add me at serpensortia06@gmail.com,
or i'll just be checking in ever week or so.
congratulations at this wonderful addition to the writers world.
serpensortia
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hey!
I really liked this story! I look forward to a sequel. Interesting plot and well written. Thanks for writing this!
Kisses ~
Roo
I really liked this story! I look forward to a sequel. Interesting plot and well written. Thanks for writing this!
Kisses ~
Roo
schedule
January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah it took me like almost 5 hours to read it. but it was worth it! oooh a sequel?YES!!