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for Lucius Hidden Son

by roseline

schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok so other than the grammer it is ok
person Enamoril
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I only have one complaint; otherwise I love this story.

Too many !'s. ><
person Japhia
schedule May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has a great plot but I think a beta would do it quire well. If you're looking, I would be happy to do it.

schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but one thing concerns me where is Harry's streng, determineation, stuborness, and attraction for trouble.
person Makovaso
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update soon.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep goin! i like it! can u e-mail me wen u next update if poss? my e-mail address is kissagram_22@hotmail.com
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

This is a great story!! It is the first Lucius as Harry's father fiction!!

Question: Will Hermione paired with anyone in this fic?? Will there be any relationships for Harry, Draco or Severus or is this just a father/son fiction??

thanks

Jessie
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah mione is were she should be now ans harry and mione dont have to hide .. but how will ron ans pasny take it ..please please update soon ... later for now

angel
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. well me am going to go home i have no reason to be at school any more i've read all fanfiction updates. well i can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow this is a wonderful story its awsome! really i never thought of having Harry as Draco's brother mmm ideas well thats my review please do send me an e-mail when you update please.