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April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Excellent plot line but terrible grammatical/translation errors. It needs a good going over by someone whose first language is English
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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HI, I loved the first few chapters, but the last two chpters I attempted to read were unredable. I couldn't understand what ws happening the grammer ws so bad. It did not make sense. Sorry. Great idea for a story but I can't finish it.
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February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow love it and the plot!!!
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November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story, but your spelling is really getting to me.... you see, my English is not my first language so i can understand it's hard to write, but you may consider taking a beta because at times,
it becomes really hard to understand what you are writhing. you write in broken english. you switch words around or use the wrong time or phrasing. again, i love your story but the spelling is making me unable to enjoy and understand it completely. best wishes....Ky
it becomes really hard to understand what you are writhing. you write in broken english. you switch words around or use the wrong time or phrasing. again, i love your story but the spelling is making me unable to enjoy and understand it completely. best wishes....Ky
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are u goung to continue this story?
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not sure what happened but this chapter was very confusing to read.
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Chapter 39 please!!!
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story but it is hard to understand, you need to find someone to help you write it so it will be easier to read and more people may enjoy your wonderful writing. As it is now I can not finish it.
J'aime vraiment que votre histoire mais le c'est dur
J'aime vraiment que votre histoire mais le c'est dur
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see what you write next. Your a gret writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri
Thank you,
Terri
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can you not write properly?
Your sentences are backwards, inside out.
Have someone doulbe check your work before you finnish the chapter.
Your sentences are backwards, inside out.
Have someone doulbe check your work before you finnish the chapter.