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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this up to chapter 17. I really think you should try and finish it though, its worth it!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love AU/AR stories like this. Even in the books, Albus was never totally 'good', for practical reasons. His only saving grace was regarding himself as a pawn just as much as anyone else. I have some grammatical issues, mere technicalities, but since I'm not qualified as a Beta, I'll leave those to the more experienced writers out there. Star is great, Voldemort is a devoted great-Uncle, and Albus is vile. Keep Writing!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am trilled to see the update:-)
I admit to be curious about what damages Hermione has, but I guess you will let us know in due time? I just love it when Harry and Hermione stick together, and for them to be half-siblings in your story is perfect! Star, the house elf is absolutely priceless, I love her:-))
I hope you will start letting us know what crimes Dumbledort has inflicted upon Hermione and Harry for them to without knowing all details, thinks of Voldemort as a safe heaven compared to the bearded bastart? (Can we strangle him in his own beard? While Star smacks his face into a bowl of some creepy potion Severus has given her....?)
I will of course also like to know where other peoples loyalty lies; the Weasleys (don't mind Weasley bashing, thogh I have a soft spot for the twins, feel free to bash Ron, Ginny and Molly to your harts content though:-)) What about Remus, I love him so be kind...:-))
I will look forward for the next update!!!!
I admit to be curious about what damages Hermione has, but I guess you will let us know in due time? I just love it when Harry and Hermione stick together, and for them to be half-siblings in your story is perfect! Star, the house elf is absolutely priceless, I love her:-))
I hope you will start letting us know what crimes Dumbledort has inflicted upon Hermione and Harry for them to without knowing all details, thinks of Voldemort as a safe heaven compared to the bearded bastart? (Can we strangle him in his own beard? While Star smacks his face into a bowl of some creepy potion Severus has given her....?)
I will of course also like to know where other peoples loyalty lies; the Weasleys (don't mind Weasley bashing, thogh I have a soft spot for the twins, feel free to bash Ron, Ginny and Molly to your harts content though:-)) What about Remus, I love him so be kind...:-))
I will look forward for the next update!!!!
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is so good. i do hope you are going to update soon.
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so for the love of BOB update soon
Ps BOB is so I dont offend anyone/thing
Ps BOB is so I dont offend anyone/thing
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o wow this is amazing! i love these kinds of stories .. okie not ones where Hermi is abused but one where albus gets his ass kicked ... ppl who are so cheerful like him are always EVIL! lol