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Mistress Starlight: That was a truly enjoyable read, action, adventure, beauty, dancing, Ron dying . . . sigh. What more could we ask for? Wonderful, wonderful writing there. Thank you so much. ***

Nonentity: Mmm yummy, and quite different too, with Hermione enjoying Ron. That's nice to see sometimes. But again I say: POOR RON. lol. Well, at least he didn't die a prat in this one. R.I.P. Mr. Weasley, and thank you Nonentity. I enjoyed it.

Oops, thanks for catching my mistake. I got caught up and didn't check up everything the way I should have...
Hey you should be an editor, you're really good at finding errors :)

Dresoul: You are welcome to add what you like, when you like. I'm going to go over the story and edit it up a bit for you, but the premise is both good and entertaining. Death by sushi is freaking funny. It's my opinion and I'm sticking to it. **** {{{{Dresoul}}}}

Dresoul, I think your story is fine, it just needed some major editing. Bad spelling and grammar can ruin even the most extraordinary story. By no means stop writing, just pay more attention to such details and you'll do much better.

Mistress Starlight: Please pardon my French, but I'm not taking shit down. I've already shared my thoughts on the piece, and understood it for what it was. You are right. This is meant to be a lighthearted foray . . . and although I respect the opinions of others . . . basically I have the final say, and I've already said it. Now, I will say this . . . the story IS an exception based on how you explained it. Plus I thought it was funny even though Snape wasn't mentioned. Still, if anyone tries to emulate your boyfriend's approach . . . it will be taken down with malice. This short is the exception, not the rule and to be honest, was accepted in deference to your wonderful addition.

In other words, yes, I can practice nepotism if I want. lol. Having three Figgdrivers halps. So ease up folks. We aren't going for Pulitzers here. Just fun.; ****

pfff if i knew my contribution was gonna make this story suck or go down then i guess i shouldnt have added it :|

I guess i will keep away from writing HP fanfic, guess is not my thing.

ooh lala

The last two chapters of this story have brought down the quality of the series.

I apologize if Chapter 81 offends anyone's superior literary senses... but the fact is, it wasn't even really meant to be a story. My boyfriend merely meant to make an attempt, however ineffectual, at humor. If it brings down the quality of the series, I really am sorry, but I just thought that Ms. Figg meant to make this a light-hearted event for people. I'm not blaming anyone, I agree that my boyfriend wasn't being a particularly serious writer. But he didn't mean to be.
At any rate, some people seem to find it unsuitable, so I don't mind if you take it down, Ms. Figg.
It just kind of seems unfair to me to pick at him, when a lot of the stories written here are either cliched, totally unimaginative, and just plain lacking.
But either way, I offer my apologies.