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Mistress: Just outright murder, eh? lol. That'll work. Ron sounded like a real prat in this story, and I wasn't sad to see him go at all this time. Some portions were rather hot as well. That always helps . . . the yumminess factor. Thank you very much for your contribution. ***

Thank you MS_FIGG, that really means a lot coming from such talent!!!

I loved this idea you had and had to force my hand into typing a contribution, I was done in under five minutes could you tell?!lol

I've been so busy and not had chance to read them all, so I really don't know if anyone went along the same path as me, though I highly doubt it! lol.

I asked could I finish work early so I could start reading some of the other contributions, though I didn't tell them that!!

I too loved maria's contribution, I love time turner fics!!!!!

JUST A NOTE: I appreciate everyone's contributions to Ron's demise immensely, however I have to say this to our new writers . . . I've enjoyed everything and if you've been bitten by the fanfic writing bug, that's wonderful. BUT, and this is a biggie, if you look at some of your stories, they've been a bit cleaned up for the sake of readability. If you have your original stories, and know I've made changes, compare them and see what I did. Alse, I would admonish you to take some time to learn the basic mechanics of writing as correctly as you can, and babies . . . it's a process. Learn how to punctuate your dialogue, separate it, separate your paragraphs, use proper tenses, check your spelling etc. It's a process. I still don't do everything right and am still learning how to write correctly. I still have probs getting on moderated sites under my own steam. So I'm not picking on you . . . just the voice of experience here as someone who always has to go back and fix something. If you start writing, I just want you to know it's really important to know your basics. A story that could be enjoyable becomes less so when there are glaring errors, and readers will be frustrated. Still, I've seen some wonderful ideas here and quite a few folks who I think have potential to really add to the fanfiction universe. Good job and keep writing.

Cheerup: ROFL!! For some reason, the simplicity and expediency of this little several line drabble cracked me up. lol. It needed major editing however, but it was still pretty funny. It came off as, "All right. She wants Ron dead . . . he's dead. No need for a big story."

Nice throw.
Thanks.

:::shakes head::: It's crazy the things that amuse me. Thanks. :)

LOL I LOVE IT, MM. That last line is great...if he dies, then so does she. ehheheheeh classic!

I did include the way Ron died, it specifically says he was choked to death, but I probably should add his little Weasle name in it. =P

*babbles incoherently*

Just catching up... Hermione ATE Ron? She... wow. That was so different! Inspired, unique! Good job Lisa Jean.

Sorry... kinda gobsmacked over here. Felt I should throw in a quickie comment. ^^

:::looks at angelprince and shakes head::: lolol Death by flashing???? You are just . . . lol. I can't even say for laughing. ***

anaretaacronycal: This was very dark, but . . . there's no mention of Ron which is one of the requirements of 100 Ways to Kill a Weasley.

I mean, lol, we have to hear something about Ron. :)

Could you please include him, or some aspect of him (a flash of red hair as he escapes through the window maybe) and repost this? Thanks girl.

It says when Snape looks out the window he sees a flaming red dot on the horizon, I know it's a minuscule mention on hair color, but I can expand it if necessary.