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#5 LVanna you goddess as usual a beautiful take on old Sevvie :D

# 53 would have made a great long story...

Holy crap, that was brilliant Maria. Is there any way you would consider continuing on with that? It looks very promising, and after one chapter, I'm already intrigued.

If you'll excuse me, I need to zip back and check your profile... maybe you've written some other stories!

Please oh please tell me you have the intention of making that a full story. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

Lisa-Jean: This was absolutely fantastic writing all around. Obviously you know some native tongue. I am very impressed and even more entertained. Wonderful, wonderful work!!! Thank you so much for this contribution!

omg...i think i need that last story, chapter 51, to become a full length story. oooh wheeeeeeee. halfway!!!!

JMFELTON: Congratulations on being contributor #50. And that wasn't too bad for a first time. Certainly not crap. So, Ron choked to death. Again I say, POOR RON. lolol.

Maria: This is a story waiting to be born girlfriend. I loved it. :) Humor, excitement, drama, ghostly meddling? Not to mention a younger, yummier Severus. What more can a reader ask for? Wonderful job. But . . . you need to post this on your account and get to writing. :))

OliversBludger: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That Potter Puppet skit is sooooo annoying. lololol. It might have been rather frivilous, but damn . . . it hit my funnybone just right. lol. Thank you for your light-hearted contribution. Depth isn't always necessary for entertainment. At least, not with me. :))))

BOTHER! BOTHER! BOTHER! BOTHER! BOTHER! LOL

Thanks folks! *blush* Maybe I've just been waiting for "the one" to get on the ball with my own full-length story. I'll see what I can do. ;)

VIDEO PIMPAGE: Occasionally I make something relatively original available by a donation of choice (Some people send 10 cents. Slicksters. lol. :::shakes head:::) Anyway, I'd like to invite you to take a look at a free low-quality preview of a "Closer" video I made featuring Severus Snape.

This is quite a graphic video, definitely XXX NC-17 but Hermione isn't "technically" in it, because I have reservations about using Emma Watson clips in such a blatantly sexual video because let's face it, she's so young and it can get rather creepy. But there are women in it. Imagination can work wonders. lol. Besides, the focus is on the MAN.

Anyway, here's the link. I hope you like the preview. This thing took forever to make. whew.

DIRECT LINK TO PREVIEW: http://theburningpen.com/clteaser.wvx

DIRECT LINK TO PAGE: http://www.theburningpen.com/closer.htm

As I said, the quality of the preview is low so those with dial-up can view it as well. The uncut version is nice and clear. I have a realmedia version for dial-up viewing as well and the complete video is downloadable. Thanks a lot.