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for What A Girl Needs

by bean1498

schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, hot, funny, I want an order form!
person wicraven
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh...like the story. Are you going to continue? Hope so. Please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic and I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant idea. I love seeing quiet girls like Hermione and Luna turning out to be sex kittens. Lucky Hermione trying it out too.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is just awesome. The business is great, lots of nice detailing with the forms and secrecy procedures and licensing and buying out of shares. You've really thought this out.
I'm interested to see if Hermione manages to cut back on her sex life. I was expecting more Draco/Hermione, but Draco's gone and run off with Harry, darn it. Hermione and Severus seem interesting though. Poor sweet Ron, he could use some more loving and tenderness.
I like that Severus is actually providing more brewing tips etc. as he relaxes, and that no one begins the story madly in love with each other. Luna's proclivities are amusing. My favorite sex scene was the one with Blaise and Hermione masturbating and Pansy watching.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Snape showing up whenever she has overnight guests is a nice humorous touch.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
btw, the boys reaction whenever Snape is in the room is hysterical. They're so skittish around him, and they turn so green at thinking about his proclivities. Ron's enthusiasm when Hermione offers him a little fun in the morning during breakfast after he finds out about Hermione and harry having sex is also a hoot.
person dest
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
incredible story! still haven't seen hermione get DP'd which you hinted at. but other then that there is nothing to complain about. great story.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done. I like it so far Keep up the good work.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just remember what was bugging me about this fic and why I was hoping for more Hermione/Draco. No one's seduced her for two hours yet and turned her into a little puddle.
nitpick--Harry was supposed to leave on Christmas and head to the Burrow, yet he was boffing Draco the entire time? And Hermione barely ever slept alone but wasn't doing anything with Draco?
Will the girls be branching out into Strokers for the guys? Or substitute hands and mouths so they can be licked and petted and sucked when no guy is around?