rate_review Reviews

Well, there were some seriously hot sex scenes in this piece, so I figured I'd offer up a review. Since you're clearly having fun with this premise, I don't really need to remark on the improbability of it all and the assassination of Hermione's character. I will say, however, that her lack of guile and her willingness to spout descriptive details of her private life to all and sundry is cause for concern, lol. Girl is a little TMI when answering questions. Also, these kids talk WAY TOO MUCH during sex, fercriminy's sake. That being said, I am surprised at some of her missed opportunities for more experimentation with the stable of boys she's already accrued. She tells Harry that she wants to try double penetration, but then she had 3 boys in her bed that all enjoyed having sex with her and she apparently forgot about it. Tsk tsk.

Another slight grievance---and I realize it's all a matter of personal taste---but I've never imagined Snape as a viable romantic partner nor plausible sex God. His relationship with Hermione is verging on creepy. I will never understand his devoted followers in fandom, but I guess everybody's got their kink.

Now, Harry in this story I LOVE!!!! Good God, can I have him for myself? Your descriptions of his talents in the bedroom are drool-inducing. I adore Harry in the books, anyway, and always found him a little sexpot, so he doesn't seem a far jump from canon. I always imagined that his early adult life would be very curious once the threat of Voldemort was gone, and I totally see him as bisexual, but I disagree with you that he would eventually choose men. I think his character would eventually fall for a woman so he could have a brood and become the family man he always wanted to be. I've seen it happen enough times. I always imagined Harry would have some masochistic tendencies as well, based on his early childhood and damaged feelings of self-worth, but his wild, dominating, forceful, dirty-talking side is completely believable.

I actually think that the two characters you've written with the most chemistry, which apparently was not by design, are Harry and Hermione. I'd rather see them get together than Snape (*shudder*) and Hermione OR Harry and Draco. H/D is as cliched and boring in slash as Harry and Ginny in the epilogue. I could see Harry wanting to fuck him for a while, but I don't see him ever respecting or liking him all that much, while I imagine that if Harry and Hermione ever saw each other in a different light; discovered a sexual compatibility, that it would be a natural progression to a relationship (once they grew up a bit). But I've rambled enough. Just wanted to let you know I was enjoying how well you've crafted this.

Wow, ummm... wow! So... I'm in love with you and your dirty talking Harry. I hope that's ok, lol. But seriously, wow. This is great! I don't know how your mind comes up with such pornyness, but you should be paid for it! I'm also glad that Hermyherm decided to take a break there for awhile too. I was getting a little worried about her XD But yes, I love you, you're brilliant, and... yay! Keep up the good work, lady!

I'm not certain how you feel about this knd of review, but I have to say, this is some of the best erotica I've read. While I don't agree with your reasoning for Hermione discovering her sexual side, your characterization and description more than makes up for the fact. It's positively sinful.

You have a promising future as a writer, in my opinion.

I just read through the whole story in one go, it's awesome! I usually ship HG/SS but I like her with the other guys too, and Harry is SO hot! You are great at writing lemons...I feel my husband will get lucky as soon as he gets home, LOL :) Keep up the good work, I really want to see what happens next. I hope she ends up with Sev though: the way I read it so far, the boys will only see her as a friend and a fuck buddy. But that's just me wishing, you are the mastermind here. *bows and goes looking for lacy underwear to seduce unsuspecting husband*

quite romantic

Please no HG/SS. What about that juicy threesome of HG/DM/HP?

This is a very good story and enjoyed reading it very much looking forward to the next update

I am really enjoying your story. Good work!

Beautiful!!!!
LOVE it!!!!

Hermione/Snape is OK personaly i pereper:
Hermione/Draco
Hermione/Harry
Hermione/Blaize

so if u can do more Hermione/Blaize i am grateful. :)

I'm not one who usually likes HG/SS but the way that this is writen so far that pairing just feels natural. I can't wait to see more.