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for What A Girl Needs

by bean1498

person sdemelo
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely voting HG/SS. I like the mix of exquisite lemons with a bit of romance slid in. It's always been my opinion that Hermione and Severus are well suited despite their age differences. Their intelligence seems to compliment each other if perhaps not their personalities. Of course, how do we know what Severus would be like outside of wartime? His memories of Lily (in DH, tho this is AU) seem to set a precedent. Anywho, I'll stop rambling. I'm so sorry that someone is copying your story! I can't wait to read later chapters! I hope you are able to keep writing soon!
person luvhp
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No updates yet??? :(
Bump, hint, grind, nudge, anything!!!
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story ive read in a while!!! please update soon, cant wait to read more!!
person Anon
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mellow03
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, good story. Since it is Master with her follow, it is likely that they would get together. But hopefully Hermione will get to be with her boys, 4 of them and love them equally, with Snape if you would in future. But I prefer with 4 boys than him. But those 4 boys will be with other and 2 will be with each other, Harry and Draco, but hope all will love each other as sexually and close emtionally, but not often as two couple. Or 4 couples if they stay together or two couple with other 2 couple. Anyway, good story.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to hear this story hasn't been abandoned. It's way too fun to leave us hanging!

Someone stole your story? That's SO uncool!!!

Good luck looking for a house. We bought our first house in November, and MAN, what a chore!! Best of luck to you with that!
person Snakelette
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really good! And HG/SS in the end? Yes please!!
person luvhp
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, I finally finished! I don't know where you come up with your ideas, positions and pairings, but DAMN!
I can't really decide which one was my favortie, although I am a severe Dramioen fan I was a bit dissapointed that they didn't get a second go. . .yet! But, for now, I guess I'd have to go with. . .
Hermione & Severus! Don't ask why, it just is :) Ron doesn't really do IT for me, and since Harry & Draco are off the market, XD I would have to lean towards Severus, even with his 'punishment'... Gods, in front of the boys no less, naughty! Loved Draco's little murmurs "relax your throat" too sweet.
Harry & Hermione were definately H.O.T HOT!
I've also come to find that I very much appreciate your slash in this story, I'm not big into it on this site,(Okay, except for WWW, bottom!Harry) much more into either threesomes + or the het, but in this one you've definately written it so well that it's very, very nice!
Okay, again, sorry about that earlier *blushes*
person ygrayne
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good please write more
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Monkey Lady!! This isn't a review of this fic (although it sounds intriguing). I'll try to read it when I get the chance. This is just a quick note to say Thank You for offering to write my challenge for me (and believe me, I do appreciate the offer), but it is already being written by SoftObsidian74. And as you discovered, she is doing a wonderful job with it (I saw your review. Thanks for that too. I know that Soft appreciates it as well). I know that there are no rules on how many writers can attempt a challenge, but I just feel grateful that one writer decided to choose mine. I don't want to appear greedy by accepting another writer's offer when there are so many other challenges just languishing on the HP challenges/requests board. My suggestion is to take a gander at them, and choose one; so, you can make another lucky challenge creator as happy as Soft has made me.

Once again, Thank You for your very gracious offer!!