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for What A Girl Needs

by bean1498

schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story!!! thank you for writing it.. i'm glad you're not abandoning it... hopefully all is well with you and your family :)..
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I totally understand that life can take a toll on a person. This is my first time that I am reading your story and reviewing. I absolutely LOVE it!! There have been so many hot scenes that I've had to take a break from reading a couple of times! It is absolutely fabulous and when u do get a chance to update, I will be waiting and reviewing!
person Liveweak
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
It's so erotic and just fun to read.
Great job.
I hope everything is going well with the pregnancy.
Also, I think you should do a pairing with Pansy and Hermione.
The last we've really heard of them was when Pansy said that it would be fun getting to know the real Hermione Granger, or something of the sort, and I just wish that would kind of build.
Oh, I'm also a big fan of Hr/DM. I looooveee them together.
Let's get them back together again, soon. Even with Harry if that's needed!
She could have the double penetration, as you have mentioned in an earlier chapter.
=]
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Obviously you have moved on, but are you going to finish this? Loving your talent and hoping for a continuation of this story too. :-)
schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this, and it's a pity you never finished it. I was very interested to see where it was going. Hope you find out who kidnapped your stories. That's a rotten thing to do to someone.
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The end?
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so.. relaxing. ^^ Just what I needed. I hope there's more.
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Damn unpredictable females. One minute you were sure they were utterly terrified and the next they were soaking wet and begging for more. What was wrong with them?"

*giggling helplessly*
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it and looking forward to more.
person morganabythesea
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry you were not getting many reviews, but here I am to add to them. I just picked up this story and you are doing such a wonderful job that I have no additions or suggestions to make except I am looking forward to your next installment! I noticed it has been three months since you updated and so will ask if you are going to continue? It is hard on this website to know who will continue their stories and who will not. I can tell you are a serious author and so assume you will, but I know our lives never go as we predict and sometimes things happen that keep us from doing things we would like to. Anyway, it is a well writen, enjoyable story and I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us who have none! :-)

Take care,

Morgana