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for What A Girl Needs

by bean1498

person Rick
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Out of all the stories posted at adultfanfiction.org, I have to put this story high up as one of the top twenty. The story has a substantial storyline and a continuity that is unsurpassed by other writers whose stories I've read. I especially like the many pairings that have occurred over the course of the story. I also have to agree with another person's review of your story regarding Hermione's take on starting the business with others to provide replicas of various wizard's wands for the purpose of providing an alternate means of gratification when the real thing is not available for females and males alike. As for the time between updates, real life does and will impact the speed with which stories can be written and/or updated. A belated congratulations with the birth of your children. Also, while I and others expectantly wait for future updates, I am sure that none of us begrudge your spending as much quality time with your husband and your family as you can. When you look at the way the world is today and all that the things that happen, not knowing what tomorrow may or may not bring gives a person pause and putting a persons focus on living life the best way possible, one day at a time. With that, I and others who read and have read this story look forward to your future updates, but only when you feel comfortable doing so. Best wishes to you and yours for your family's future lives.

Sincerely,
Rick
schedule September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope you revisit this very interesting tale. Would be nice to add to her collective list. Lucius, Theo Nott, Marcus, Adrian, and even Kingsley. That would be rather interesting in how she gets their molds :P
person bellakuuipo
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot express how much I love this story.

It's well written and very hawt.

I love the Multi-pairings.

I really hope you continue this story.
person natasha
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ur gonna break my heart if u don't update lol. Please update soon, and I reckon a HG/SS ending would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DuckieSongbird
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just wondering if this story is going to be updated soon. I really like it and would love to read the rest of it.
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not sure how long it's been since you posted the AN, but I hope that you come back to this story. I enjoyed it very much.
person morganabythesea
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story again after many months, and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it!:-)

If you ever decide to continue you will have many, many more fans than you already do! Your combination of sex, personalities, and plot, made this a very interesting story. I loved reading and feeling how you saw these characters, who they were, how they had changed as we all do through our teenage years. Your idea of master and apprentice was genius, (what a way to bring Snape in) the opening up to new ideas of Hermione, Harry, Draco, and Ron too was wonderful, and of course all of the girls. It was great that Hermione kept her love of knowledge, explored sex as throughly as she would a lesson and then made it a business, it is just so Hermione. :-) She should never feel bad about experimenting though. You are only young once.


I hope everything is going well with you and your family.

Thanks again for sharing with us.
person Duckie
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Just wondering when you would be updating again. I know RL gets in the way, but one can't help but be curious...lol :)
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know that being promoted is an achievement but pregnancy needs relax and me time.. My only suggestion is balace all but put your self first.. Good luck.. We will be waiting .
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, are we or aren't we going to finish?