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for Temptations

by Nikkilicious

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schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting :) and i think you did a really good job with how the two characters would react. of course hermione would be the one to notice something is wrong, and how draco doesnt listen but ends up getting them out of the mess... brilliant ^_^ im totally going to follow this story to the end!

and fyi, cuz this story is based of the seven sins, i researched the movie 'seven' online (it stars brad pitt) and oh my god that shit is disgusting! i dont know if you've seen the movie, but if ever you have time to rent or see it, do... it's really twisted, bit really good...

xoxoxoxoxo
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, do please continue :-D Seven deadly sins are always a wonderful undertone to any story analyzation haha ^_^

no, no sarcasm all props, and looking forward to gluttony (mmm....food...)
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was great more please!
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schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such as interesting story ^_^
how did you even think of writing a story using the seven deadly sins... that's so original! hmm... i wander what will happen when they get to lust? ... *giggles*
it was a great first chapter and i cant wait for more :)

xoxoxoxo